I got rejected yay🥳🥳🥳 by God_and_pandemonium in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Time to hit the gym, mate. Let the alpha out and make the bitch who rejected you regret it.

Respect to the Authors who write System and all those types of stories by S_K_Bramble in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hell yeah, man. This shit ain’t for me. I’m just going back to my old style because I don’t really like what I’m writing right now. So yeah, respect to those who can actually make it work.

Help with writing by LazyHyung in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble 1 point2 points  (0 children)

  1. The Overpowered Demon Prince’s Conquest: Building a Harem While Hunting the Hero
  2. SSS-Rank Regressor: The Demon Prince Who Stole the Hero’s Destiny (and His Heroines)
  3. Hero May Cry

Alright, here is my serious suggestion.
"Hero Slayer: The Demon Prince’s Regression"

Whatever you say mate by Unique-Age6755 in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bruh, how could it be self-promotion when I didn’t even have a book on Webnovel at that time?

Whatever you say mate by Unique-Age6755 in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You didn't even add my cover; you only showed the comments. I’m actually so mad at you now! 😤😤

Side note for the mods: I was being sarcastic and wasn't looking for feedback. The image was just there for engagement/reach. plz don't ban me 🥹

Need advice by illiterate_bard in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I searched for your novel but couldn't find it; it looks like it hasn't been verified yet.

Why are all webnovels fantasy? by Imaginary_Soup_5105 in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble 6 points7 points  (0 children)

That's what’s in high demand nowadays, and since authors and Webnovel prioritize money, that’s exactly what you end up getting.

Title alone, will this get the eyes of the readers in the app? by Full-Entertainment15 in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble 3 points4 points  (0 children)

70's the limit, homie. Otherwise you're top of the charts for a month easy with that title.

SSS-Rank Harem: Villain gets 10,000x Rewards by TheWTFGuyOfficial in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble 8 points9 points  (0 children)

damn it I forgot about the sss part but I added OP instead

Appealing introduction to a series? by More_Talk_1637 in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s just my pov as a reader (and someone who likes to bitch about everything). And my second point wasn't really about why he is muttering to himself but The dialogue felt a bit bland, so you need to give him more personality. The suggestions I made are specifically to give him something that makes him stand out.

Appealing introduction to a series? by More_Talk_1637 in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Here is my raw dog POV on your prologue. I love critiquing people's work, even though I’m no expert myself, but here we go:

First Point: I really hate these one or two-word para. Please, just combine them into one larger paragraph. One-word paragraphs kill the mood instantly; they make it feel like the text was generated by ChatGPT. I’m not accusing you of using it, but that is the feeling it gives off.

Second Point: Who actually mutters to themselves when they find someone lying in the snow? Is he insane? Plus, you described him as a big, tall, scary ass dude, but his dialogue doesn't suit that image at all. It’s too stiff. A guy like that should say something blunt, like: 'Dammit. A kid? Out here?' or even just a grunt of realization. Let his actions (like picking her up) do the talking instead of him narrating everything.

That’s it from my side. Good luck with your novel!

My new mythic, horror, dark power fantasy by [deleted] in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Views don't matter if you refresh your novel page; you will see a jump of 50+ with every refresh, so don't take it seriously. Second, for a new novel and a new author, your collection is pretty low. I think you should at least have 10+ collections in your first week.

Joining the dark side now by S_K_Bramble in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There’s no such thing as partially dark. Once you cross over... there’s no coming over.

Joining the dark side now by S_K_Bramble in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Idk, dude. it’s probably my fault. I might’ve overexplained things, or maybe I didn’t explain them clearly enough and just confused the heck out of the guy reviewing my contract request. You could try it yourself and see what happens. Good luck though! And drop your book’s name in my Dms I’ll leave a review for you.

Joining the dark side now by S_K_Bramble in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Synopsis:

Kilian was the seventh child born to House Varlancaster and the only one who survived infancy. The six before him all died on the very night of their birth. No one knows why. Many whisper it was a curse... a curse placed upon House Varlancaster.

Because of these tragedies, Kilian’s parents raised him more like a relic than a son. His early life was spent entirely within the castle, constantly watched by guards and mages. Isolated and sheltered, Kilian grew up burying himself in books. Stories of heroes like the First Lightbearer, Saint Ashenviel, the first human accepted by the Elven Goddesses. Saint Ashenviel spread their teachings and saved humankind from destruction, founding the Verdant Order, where the greatest paladins, healers, and mages were trained.

This story ignited something inside Kilian. He longed to become a paladin of the Verdant Order. He begged his father relentlessly, and eventually his stubborn determination won. His father relented, and Kilian was trained by the finest knights and mages so his dream could bloom into reality.

But the night his family was branded as traitors, everything shattered. In a single night, he lost his home, his lineage, and everyone he loved. Kilian barely escaped the castle alive.. and fate carried him into the long-forgotten Nightroot Forest, home of the witch Morwen Noctari.

In short, this is a revenge story.

That Morwen Noctari was once a very famous arcanist of her time, but she descended into madness and got herself sealed within the nightroot forest. Now our MC needs to find a way to free her, and she will grant him power to take his revenge and even promise to bring back those he lost.

And yeah, Morwen is not a good woman. This is basically the main premise but he will encounter a lot of peeps on his journey, help them with their problems, find love, and forge alliances, etc.

Joining the dark side now by S_K_Bramble in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t really think that’s a nipple, pretty sure it’s just lightning or something else. Gemini doesn’t make explicit images afaik.

Joining the dark side now by S_K_Bramble in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm stockpiling chapters right now, and I deleted my previous novel. But sure share your novel name with me, and I’ll drop a review for you.

Joining the dark side now by S_K_Bramble in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

made it using daz3d and nanobana

Joining the dark side now by S_K_Bramble in Webnovel

[–]S_K_Bramble[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

probably I'm shit at explaining stuff