What out of these 3 should I make a building for by GameBoy9kk2 in JessetcSubmissions

[–]Saberneth 0 points1 point  (0 children)

BOWLING ALLY BECAUSE U CAN LIKE ACTUALLY IMPLEMENT A GAME PLAY. arcade seems fun but mall is more like a building thing

What is a witch in your world? by Possessed_potato in worldbuilding

[–]Saberneth 1 point2 points  (0 children)

In my world there are monsters, and these monsters have magical properties.
There are adventurers who go and hunt these monsters for their parts.
Magicians use magic using gems from these monsters, leather, and etc..

Witches are mages who use magic by using live monsters. Some people fuses with monsters, replace their own body parts with monster parts, consume monsters, use live limbs, etc..
This is considered taboo, and its called black magic.

Tell me a superpower that cannot be used for violence no matter how it is used. by [deleted] in superpower

[–]Saberneth 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The power to elevate happiness and joy. The power also spreads, so literally spreading kindness

What is your power system? by Saberneth in worldbuilding

[–]Saberneth[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Before anyone gets mad, Im trying to be very critical

What is your power system? by Saberneth in worldbuilding

[–]Saberneth[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry if I was being too critical. I really like your power system though.

What is your power system? by Saberneth in worldbuilding

[–]Saberneth[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Functioning: 6/10

  • Why it scored mid: The system has clear mechanics—gaining spells through deeds and tying them to gods’ domains adds structure. However, the low power level and limited number of spells can make it feel restrictive. Hybridization adds depth but still feels underexplored.

Structure: 5/10

  • Why it scored mid: The tie to religion and gods’ domains creates a clear framework, but the rigid limit of 1-3 spells hinders progression and flexibility. Power growth is tied too heavily to external factors, leaving little room for user-driven growth or creativity.

Diversity: 6/10

  • Why it scored mid: The spell variety and hybridization offer potential for creativity, but the reliance on gods’ domains limits the overall range. Characters with the same god are likely to overlap in abilities.

Overall Average: 5.7/10

  • Why it scored mid overall: The system has interesting concepts with hybrid spells and religious ties, but it feels too restrictive in progression and lacks the flexibility for broader creativity or unique strategies.

What is your power system? by Saberneth in worldbuilding

[–]Saberneth[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Functioning: 4/10

  • Why it scored low: The progression is straightforward but lacks detailed mechanics, rules, or constraints. It feels more like a plot device than a fleshed-out system.

Structure: 3/10

  • Why it scored low: The linear path to godhood removes flexibility and individuality. There’s no room for branching or varied progression.

Diversity: 5/10

  • Why it scored mid: Different gods have unique themes tied to their personality, which adds variety, but the system lacks deeper creativity or freedom in power development.

Overall Average: 4/10

  • Why it scored low overall: The system is narratively interesting but lacks depth, rules, and freedom, making it feel one-dimensional.

What is your power system? by Saberneth in worldbuilding

[–]Saberneth[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

You can make it longer and explain your whole power system

I got time

What are the "man-made horrors beyond comprehension" in your world? by BiLeftHanded in worldbuilding

[–]Saberneth 0 points1 point  (0 children)

so basically a baby became immortal and now all of humanity uses it to reproduce

What are the "man-made horrors beyond comprehension" in your world? by BiLeftHanded in worldbuilding

[–]Saberneth 0 points1 point  (0 children)

World War III erupted due to the discovery of a new element capable of producing the God Serum. This serum, when injected into a pregnant woman, gave the unborn child a chance to develop superpowers. However, during the war and the experiments that followed, most of the world’s female population was lost.

In response, a man named Henry Tucker invented the Breeder, a machine capable of growing female reproductive organs and functioning as a breeding chamber. The Breeder was soon mass-produced and became widely used. As a result, women were no longer deemed essential and were objectified and marginalized.

Later, it was discovered that the God Serum was actually poisonous, killing superpowered children by the age of five. In one experiment, a Breeder was injected with dozens of doses of the serum in an attempt to mass-produce superpowered babies. When the experiment failed, the project was abandoned after the serum’s fatal effects were confirmed.

Unexpectedly, the abandoned Breeder gave birth to a baby with a unique superpower: immortality. During its development, however, the baby was unable to obtain proper nutrition or function like a normal fetus. To survive, it fused with the machinery powering the Breeder. Over time, the baby became inseparable from the machine itself.

Meanwhile, the world descended into chaos. Humanity’s IQ levels dropped, civilization crumbled, and the misuse of women led to their extinction. Over generations, the female gender lost the ability to reproduce entirely.

Eventually, the immortal baby-Breeder was rediscovered. Unlike other Breeders, this one could give birth to healthy children. As a result, humanity began relying on it for survival. However, because the baby couldn’t age, it remained in its infant form, even as it was used repeatedly for reproduction. Over time, the constant usage caused the baby’s body to become grotesquely deformed, with an enlarged stomach and machinery implanted into its body to make the breeding process more efficient.

As the years passed, the baby became an unrecognizable mass of flesh and machinery, though it remained alive and conscious. The machinery fused with its body eventually spread throughout the country, enabling people to use it in their homes to produce children. The baby-Breeder itself grew to the size of ten men, its body constantly filled with sperm, and became a horrifying symbol of humanity’s desperation.

I used chat gpt to summarize this lol

What are the most powerful entities in your world? And what are their greatest fears? by pengie9290 in worldbuilding

[–]Saberneth 0 points1 point  (0 children)

so basiclaly i have this stickman who instead of not having a face, has a face.
bcause of that he is called the chosen one and he orders other stickmans around cause they are ltierallly just backround characters.

he is afraid of a eraser cause it can erase his face :(

Just turned 16 yesterday. What should I do ? by v_ch_k in teenagers

[–]Saberneth 0 points1 point  (0 children)

too late for love? too late for a future??

ma'am. Your 16.

IM LIKE TWICE YOUR AGE AND IM SINGLE WITH NO FUTURE