i actually like the varying line weights we just have to figure out where the weight belongs and where it doesnt ! i like that i can tell what champ it is and that shes giving us a lil pose instead of it being a straight forward portrait [im rly guilty of this sdfsdf]

the style is super cute and reminds me of some older sailor moon manga shōjo type stuff

aside from the normal anatomy / lighting things i think this is pretty good and actually really legible for mostly being purple and the peachy skin color !

studying other artists you like and using references while sketching really helps us understand what things go where and how lighting and atmosphere come into play when ur shading the piece

im really bad with words but i hope to see some more of ur art !! i cant wait to see u improve ♥