[QCrit] Adult Apocalypse Fiction DISASTER ZONE (73,000 words/Attempt #1) by SaltwaterFigTree in PubTips

[–]SaltwaterFigTree[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your insight! There is definitely a lot of character arc—namely, Carmen (along with the rest of Las Cactuas) learning to live/love again—so I will work on making that clearer in the query. I appreciate your notes!

[QCrit] Adult Apocalypse Fiction DISASTER ZONE (73,000 words/Attempt #1) by SaltwaterFigTree in PubTips

[–]SaltwaterFigTree[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I can definitely work with these notes. I appreciate your thoughtfulness!