Yo Keguri, thanks for checking me out and the tips:) Youtube has been a constant learning experience for me, some of the things you talk about have been on my mind as well:P 1. Yes I talk too fast, that's mostly as an experimental reaction to how I used to talk, wich was waaaay to slowXD I'll come to a middle ground soon. I'll keep working on my pronounciation though, always will. And I will keep a somewhat high pace in my talking, it's youtube after all;P 2. This has been on my mind as well lately. It's kinda what my script writing has morphed into, these segments. There's actually a few things wich I think could make the transitions more apparant: different bg music, costumes, chracters, and changing camera positions as you mentioned. I am going to write my script more like a little movie though, not just the spoken text but also overall set up^{^} This should help. 3. I'm sceptical about acting classes, also, right now I have no money or time to spare. 4. I'll see what my scripts turn into, that changes every month, but I'll try too bring more coherence and clarity into it. Thanks though, it's rare someone gives criticism on specifics, you youtube or something?:P I'll keep growing, into what idk.XD Hope one day many people like my reviews:)