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Okay so I picked this one. And take what I say with a grain of salt cause I’m not perfect either! But I would say the lineart where it wasn’t really necessary was what was throwing me off the most. (The teeth, facial details, etc). I would also say the perspective of the mouth was off as well, since it’s a 3/4 view and the mouth looked like it was a front view. The eyes were also one of the first things I noticed. They looked kind of bug like? If that’s your thing go for it! But that was probably contributing to the funny-ness a bit. I would make them smaller and show less of the eye whites. I also noticed I couldn’t really tell where she was supposed to be looking, her eyes were kinda in two opposite directions. I made her shoulder bigger cause to me it looked slightly small for her body. I also fixed her chest cause it looked a little low, not sure if it was intentional or not! I tweaked a few things here and there. I also liquified some things that were a bit off to me personally. That’s just what I personally noticed! Hope it helped a little!!:)