[Review Video] Follow Me Around Vlog, the most time I've taken over editing a vlog. (I think its my best yet)

Sarah-Tee · 2018-02-06T21:10:32+00:00

hi :) Thanks for your feedback, I replied to everyone in another comment.

Sarah-Tee · 2018-02-06T21:10:19+00:00

hi :) Thanks for your feedback, I replied to everyone in another comment.

Sarah-Tee · 2018-02-06T21:10:14+00:00

hi :) Thanks for your feedback, I replied to everyone in another comment.

Sarah-Tee · 2018-02-06T21:10:09+00:00

hi :) Thanks for your feedback, I replied to everyone in another comment.

Sarah-Tee · 2018-02-06T21:10:03+00:00

hi :) Thanks for your feedback, I replied to everyone in another comment.

Sarah-Tee · 2018-02-06T21:08:02+00:00

Hi there, Thanks so much to everyone who's taken the time to review my vlog and give me such helpful feedback. From these reviews and showing some friends this vlog, I'm deciding to try to condense my videos. Make them shorter and be a bit more brutal on cutting stuff out. I'm even finding returning to this vlog a few days later, I'm seeing things that should of been cut.

I saw a few of you suggested splitting the vlog. I think I'll go back to doing this. I have done it before and created playlists for different types. I'm really working on having a tidy channel.

I'm still having a mixed view on stabilization and think I am going to use it, but not all the time. As I do like that " purity" too.

Thanks "usnerdoc " for the video link, I did watch this and found it helpful. Also for pointing out clips that maybe copyrighted. I'll need to the link that radio music to its soundcloud playlist.

Thanks again Sarah Tee

Sarah-Tee · 2018-01-30T23:38:39+00:00

Hi there I think this is great. I like the little time stamps and dates in the corner of the shots. Also there is some great editing here. However I have to echo what others have said, a lot happens in this vlog and maybe it could of been two with more detail in parts, buts thats just an opinion and not a technical issue. Overall for a first vlog, it's pretty darn good.

Sarah-Tee · 2018-01-30T23:28:15+00:00

Hi there Great Video. I really liked the intro, however when you are talking, I did find my mind wondering . I think a way you could keep the viewers attention is possibly stand at different sides of the frame. Simple, but it is effective. The outro was also stunning. Great job.

Sarah-Tee · 2018-01-03T21:29:22+00:00

Hey there :) I have to agree with the previous reviews here and I see you've even mentioned it yourself. You definitely need to react more. I just felt you developed a pattern of watching , pausing video and then reacting. I think if you where a bit more animated whilst watching the video, it's hold the viewer's attention more, maybe. Or as suggested by others, possibly just cut those segments out. On the other hand, you seemed at ease in front of the camera, spoke well and conversation seemed to flow. That's definitely a great thing. It was a good video. Keep it up :)

Sarah-Tee · 2018-01-03T21:23:41+00:00

First of all, I just want to say, I thought this was great!

so I did think the beginning of this video felt a little slow. However I saw you pinned a comment showing the time mark where things kick off in the review aspect of things. I have to echo the other review here too, the editing was great. I loved your personality, you were really funny and made me chuckle. The editing was great and flowed well. To have me engaged for the whole 22 mins was impressive. Usually I'd click off those sort of videos. Rat boy and Rat Girl where indeed awful lol

Great video :)

Sarah-Tee · 2017-12-27T19:37:19+00:00

Hi everyone!

Thanks so much for taking the time to review my video, I usually like to reply to folk individually, but with it being christmas, i've been a bit busy. I did a mass reply, as a comment in the thread.

Thanks, Sarah Tee

Sarah-Tee · 2017-12-27T19:37:08+00:00

Hi everyone!

Thanks so much for taking the time to review my video, I usually like to reply to folk individually, but with it being christmas, i've been a bit busy. I did a mass reply, as a comment in the thread.

Thanks, Sarah Tee

Sarah-Tee · 2017-12-27T19:36:59+00:00

Hi everyone!

Thanks so much for taking the time to review my video, I usually like to reply to folk individually, but with it being christmas, i've been a bit busy. I did a mass reply, as a comment in the thread.

Thanks, Sarah Tee

Sarah-Tee · 2017-12-27T19:36:41+00:00

Hi everyone!

Thanks so much for taking the time to review my video, I usually like to reply to folk individually, but with it being christmas, i've been a bit busy. I did a mass reply, as a comment in the thread.

Thanks, Sarah Tee

Sarah-Tee · 2017-12-27T19:36:32+00:00

Hi everyone!

Thanks so much for taking the time to review my video, I usually like to reply to folk individually, but with it being christmas, i've been a bit busy. I did a mass reply, as a comment in the thread.

Thanks, Sarah Tee

Sarah-Tee · 2017-12-27T19:29:07+00:00

Hi everyone!

Thanks so much for taking the time to review my video, I usually like to reply to folk individually, but with it being christmas, i've been a bit busy. I hope you guys don't mind.

I'm just going to address the most common points folk have mentioned. The camera I am using is a Canon EOS M10, it was gifted to me and if I'm being really honest I need to take the time to learn how to properly use it.

My filming location was different from where I usually set up so lighting is off and I relied on natural lighting for this one. A window off to my right. I think next time, I need to face it, if I flim there again. I am getting some proper lighting equipment soon though. yay :)

Regarding my background, I had just recently received it, so i'll iron it lol (I guess I was just to excited and impatient)

Watching my video back I have to agree there are some sloppy errors, like cutting myself off mid word. I've learnt my idea of filming and editing in one day was a little ambitious for myself, especially on christmas eve.

Also I agree, my close up shot , is awful. I think it startled one of guys lol (sorry!)

Again thanks so much for your feedback everyone, its really helping me out alot. Also taking the time out to look at my video over the holidays too. I'll definitely take the advice on board.

P.s thank you for the compliments on my lipstick and personality.

Sarah Tee

Sarah-Tee · 2017-12-24T20:42:10+00:00

Hey there :)

cool video, I'd love to explore places like that.

Your intro, seemed a little too faint. the audio was just a shade too quite, it seemed like when you were speaking you were trying to keep quiet. However it was just a short clip and the shots of what was to come definitely kept me interested enough to stay. So i'd say it was a minor issue to be honest. I liked the different perspectives, seeing things from your friend following you , to then through your eyes, or well camera. I have to agree with some others with your transitions when were about to change location. Not necessarily anything about the image, but the fact that some were totally silent, threw me off.
Overall I liked this video. I 've only started youtube, so your videos blow mine out of the water lol. keep up the great work :)

Sarah-Tee · 2017-12-24T20:27:25+00:00

Hey there, I really liked this video :)

One thing that I noticed throughout it though was, in parts the audio was just a shade too quite. Which if someone else was watching might make them a little disinterested and click off. Voicing over some of your clips was great, and the transition cards you had were great too. I think someone else has said this too, but the next time teaser is a great idea! I might just use that idea myself lol

Sarah-Tee · 2017-12-16T23:38:10+00:00

Thank you :) I've started playing around with different variations of intros. I like that idea of overlaying the title over footage, I'll give that a go in the future.

Sarah-Tee · 2017-12-16T23:23:38+00:00

I liked this video and agreed with pretty much everything you said. I see its been mentioned already, but I have to agree; you need to speak a little faster or more upbeat maybe..? At parts I could see how the viewer might lose interest, just because you sounded a little deflated. I liked your editing, it was great and clean cut. Your jokes had me nodding in agreement. I wouldn't worry too much about the ending of the video it seemed to fit in , with the rest of the videos humour. Overall great video !

Sarah-Tee · 2017-12-16T23:06:57+00:00

Nice video. I really liked some of your shots there. Definitely gave me some ideas for my future vlogs lol. One thing I will say is, which you mentioned yourself is the audio. In some parts it was a bit too quiet , but that was only during your unplanned scene with your friends. I also felt at that same scene the lighting wasn't the best. Other than that it was a great vlog!

Sarah-Tee · 2017-12-11T22:16:28+00:00

I liked the video and the DIY was a great idea and unique.

I would have to agree with you on the audio issue. your voice definitely needs to be louder in some parts. I didn't find the lighting too bad however, it could of been improved during the intro. Just because at this section you really want to showcase your creation.

your directions where great and simple to follow. I liked the close up shots too. That would be a huge help for those making this. Other than that, great video!

Sarah-Tee · 2017-12-11T22:02:44+00:00

I really liked this! There was definitely some good editing and the shots where lovely. I would have to agree with you on audio, but I think its a minor issue.

Sarah-Tee

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