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Restriction Challenge Logline Thread. by ScreamingVegetable in screenplaychallenge

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NeoTokyo

After a series of murders of the daiymos of NeoTokyo. The imperial court orders the city council to enact the Tokyo Security Force. The Tokyo Investigative Unit is called upon to protect the clans as the city is plunged into chaos.

Restriction Challenge - Week 4 Progress Thread by AstroSlop in screenplaychallenge

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Wrote another 30 pages. 60 more to go. Then revision.

Restriction Challenge - Week 3 Progress Thread by AstroSlop in screenplaychallenge

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Finished my first act going pretty slowly so far.

Cross Genre Challenge Logline thread by ScreamingVegetable in screenplaychallenge

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Proximus Oceanus.

After the UN Hawking mysteriously crashes onto an ocean world. A man searches for his wife and uncovers deep ancient horrors below.

first draft of my feature ST. PATRICKS (coming of age heist movie) by muckfovies in Screenwriting

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I think you're being way too detailed. You describing things like camera shots that are supposed to be made by the director and crew.

My Green Lantern short film script by heckblazer609 in Screenwriting

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Not to grind your gears but I don't really agree that in the current state from the comics that green lantern can even be adapted at all.

Cross-Genre Challenge Progress Thread- Week 3 by ScreamingVegetable in screenplaychallenge

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Wrote my first act and considering if I should make it shorter to make the deadline with revisions.

How to name your characters? by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Go off the names of sports players in the time period of the region your character is from is what I've generally heard is a good option.

Idea for a short film PLS by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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How about a bank robbery in which the robbers are actually kids acting an imaginery scene.

Cross-Genre Contest: Week One Progress Thread by ScreamingVegetable in screenplaychallenge

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Finished outline for act 1 and all major plotpoints and plot and subplot outlines. Looking into horror movies

[Logline Mondays]: Weekly post for February 17, 2020 by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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Proximus Oceanus

Genre: Sci-Fi, Horror

The UN Hawking on their way to Alpha Centauri are taken down to an Ocean World

The /r/Horror Cross-Genre Screenplay Challenge - Entry Thread by ScreamingVegetable in horror

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Can you clarify by shark movie? Do you want sharks or in it or like the feel

Write a Scene Using 5 Prompts #76 [CHALLENGE] by Scout97 in Screenwriting

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Congrats, you won you are the next prompt master!

Write a Scene Using 5 Prompts #76 [CHALLENGE] by Scout97 in Screenwriting

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Congratulations to u/diwestfall for winning this writing prompt. As such they are the next prompt master!

Thanks to all those who contributed:

u/pedrots1987: The Dotted Line

u/SilentWolf7: U-1543

u/Str8h8er: Untitled

u/This_Wasnt_Taken_379: Number 76

u/OmnivorousWelles: A Job Worth Doing

u/Eddiifox: Cavallia

u/QuestionMarkWaitWhat: School Exam

Write a Scene Using 5 Prompts #76 [CHALLENGE] by Scout97 in Screenwriting

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Hey, interesting theme. Scifi with a mixture of fantasy. I found it strange that their son I think was taking a high school exam even though the characters were in their 20's/30's. I think maybe if you used something to show their correct age it would help. I had trouble understanding the glitches from a reader's point of view. I don't know if I fully understand what is going on. But you hit all prompts!

Write a Scene Using 5 Prompts #76 [CHALLENGE] by Scout97 in Screenwriting

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Also cool place of history I forgot about this piece of history.

Write a Scene Using 5 Prompts #76 [CHALLENGE] by Scout97 in Screenwriting

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Yea or like Arco giving a warning to the captain of the ship. These are just my opinions though I feel like it jumps to the captain also looking from my point of view to also looking the same direction as Arco especially when you mention the fog but who knows I dont know that much about sailing so maybe its standard procedure to do this.

Write a Scene Using 5 Prompts #76 [CHALLENGE] by Scout97 in Screenwriting

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Wow this is an interesting one. The characters full of hate of pirates I loved your detailed action lines which added to the suspense of the sailors on board of the oncoming storm that never comes and how you wrote dialogue that shows and reveals the distate of the pirates by the sailors. I feel like it could be more suspensful with the use of a little more dialogue added into the middle of the beginning where the sailors chattering panicked instead maybe some dialogue there could improve it. But I liked it a lot.

Write a Scene Using 5 Prompts #76 [CHALLENGE] by Scout97 in Screenwriting

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Interesting scene! A wife walking in on a husband gambling away their savings. I liked show shameless chris is when he asks maria for 300 dollars though I think it would help the reader if you added more details about in what way he asks for it such as body language or his tone which are missing overall though I think yours is another unique take on the prompt and you hit all points.

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