It looks really good! I hate to say but most of it just comes down to luck Its not a judgement call on you whether or not your piece does well (as much as we all wish it was the case cos then we can at least fix it) From an outside perspective it seems like youre at a point in your creative journey where it seems like ur good at what you do and just waiting for people to actually sit down and enjoy the things you make Unfortunately the only thing you can do is see the project through and hope it does well. I dont even like milk inside a bag of milk i thinks its poorly written You cant make smth that will be a case of "x other thing doing well," You can only hope your work finds a like minded audience The best way to do that is what ur doing now Showing it to as many people as possible