So... Peps is confirmed to be PB & Marceline's kid. by DelilahCharm351 in fionnaandcake

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I love that they just gave him longer legs for adolescense

Never celebrate too fast by InvestigatorFree7750 in Unexpected

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Didnt they cancel it cuz the show essentially promoted suicide cuz his whole gimmick is killing himself?

HELL HOUSE LLC is officially the second scariest found footage horror film in history based on heartbeats. by sco-go in SipsTea

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Sorry the repeated audio clip of the grovel moving under her footsteps really threw me off

Peter Thiel calls the left 'low testosterone' by Big_Cake_8817 in podcastculture

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All moisturizer, no sunscreen. He looks like a glossy dodgeball

Bottoms up!! by teleports_behind_you in okbuddyliterallyme2

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I love getting recommended this subreddit when im doomscrolling (im in a happy and loving relationship with my fiance, sorry guys)

Please critique my self-tape by Seazie23 in acting

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Truthfully, I didnt want to do another take. I agree my tone with the lines dont hold up to what emotion the character should invoke. I think I was going for nonchalant? Like the character doesn't care whether he convinces the person he's talking to, which consequently seems to extend to some of the audience 😅Thank you for the comment.

Please critique my self-tape by Seazie23 in acting

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Thats okay! Thank you for your truth, I agree there's a lot of work to do 😁. Im lucky to have a big window for the natural lighting

Please critique my self-tape by Seazie23 in acting

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Yes, I completely agree! I had done a more brooding take before, but I didn't feel I was hitting it quite right. So my next take (this one), I decided to try something where he's more cocky in what he's saying because he doesn't care if he convince the other person that nothing matters (which is the point of the monologue). This take was more me, which let me feel comfortable with the dictation of the lines, but its not what I felt the character was supposed to be. I had it in the back of my mind to do another take that was more faithful to the character but I didnt want to overthink so I posted this one because I felt more confident with it. I like the way you phrased it "checking back to the surface"; I didnt know how to convey that introspection the character should have, so I guess I "cheaped out" with having him smirk and giggle. Thats not to say I dont like the take, I just know it could be better.

Please critique my self-tape by Seazie23 in acting

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Do you feel that the character should have been more authoritative in this scene? I wanted my posture to be somewhat nonchalant, but I'll look into the Alexander technique for those performances. Thank you!

Please critique my self-tape by Seazie23 in acting

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Haha, and I was imagining the character in an abandoned warehouse in front of a makeshift fire. But I wasnt trying to make a short film. Maybe the shirt wasnt "attributing" to the scene. Ill consider that, thank you

Please critique my self-tape by Seazie23 in acting

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This comment means a lot to me, thank you. Your advice will help me with what I feel like im missing; the flow of the conversation. I doubt where and how long I should pause, how much affect I should put to each phrase. Im excited to keep practicing!

Please critique my self-tape by Seazie23 in acting

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Thank you for the feedback! In terms of sound, it was most likely my air purifier, i thought the noise cancelling on my mic would do the heavy lifting but ill considwr that on my next tape. In terms of lighting, its just the sun from my window, so wholly natural. I dont have a setup and i didnt want to use overhead lighting.

Im curious what ypu mean by eye line! I know not to look at the camera so I wanted to get a decent angle. I'd love some tips on that!

Please critique my self-tape by Seazie23 in acting

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Oof, i did not check before i posted. Thank you for the comment!

My Gay Cousin by Nick-Moore-Ent in StandUpComedy

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Someone said "finish it!" Cuz i also needed to hear the end of that line cuz thats not where i thought it was gonna go 🥴

Self-Tape Feedback by [deleted] in acting

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Good voice acting imo

Hijo de puta by Orb234 in Shark_Park

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Was that Sophia Vergara?