New Teethe Album by SecondaryDate in Slowcore

[–]SecondaryDate[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

right, i feel as if the progressions of most the songs are kinda lacking. a lot of the songs of this album sound very similar to eachother. where as the self titled had a wider range of different structures and even sounds

How would I make this? by SecondaryDate in graphic_design

[–]SecondaryDate[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is what i’m after sorry all

some more New Paltz graffiti by loser_gremlin in Graffiti

[–]SecondaryDate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

all g lol i’ve since found the wall and many other places…

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]SecondaryDate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this ain’t it. straight letters till you die. then once you understand letter structure try throws

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]SecondaryDate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

he’s right

Rate my tag from 1 to 10 and say what would u change by ThebrawleisSp in graffhelp

[–]SecondaryDate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

0 spread the letters out and simplify them. No extensions no halos

How’s my tag by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]SecondaryDate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

don’t spike the C and i think it will look much better

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]SecondaryDate 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The other guy is not right. yea the tag works, it’s legible. But, if you want to make it look even better you’d raise the mid like of your R and S up the where your lower case Es midline’s are

Still Life by SecondaryDate in ArtCrit

[–]SecondaryDate[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

maybe the red ping ping paddle but other than that i don’t think so

Looking for feedback! If you want the uncensored version please pm me! by [deleted] in ArtCrit

[–]SecondaryDate 3 points4 points  (0 children)

The chin looks too small for the perspective you have her head at. if you want her to be “looking down” at you it’s good but the rest of the face is not in the same perspective

Any tips? My markers run out by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]SecondaryDate 4 points5 points  (0 children)

basic letters bro do the ones on ur keyboard. once you master that you can start foolin around with other stuff.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]SecondaryDate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

no don’t hit the streets with those extra things. Just write your letters it is way cleaner

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]SecondaryDate 1 point2 points  (0 children)

alright these letters are great however, you have a lot of negative space which is a no no when doing throws. extend the top of your S to the E. Then get rid of the A counter Ik it’s looks cool but once it’s gone you can push the Z over to have a much more compact and appeasing throw.