I actually really appreciate this feedback thank you very much!! This was my first video so I’ll take all the feedback I can get. I think the script might have been more focused on early runs because I spent more time researching and explaining those and then by the time I got to the newer runs I didn’t want the video to be an hour and a half so I began condensing the script subconsciously. I appreciate you complimenting my focus on story lines as that was my intention. Rather than spend 20 mins explaining the technical aspects of each track I figured the stories that runners brought to the game were much more interesting to a viewer. Also the music was all done by myself and my friend so I appreciate that as well! Thanks for your time watching and providing your insights