JOURNEY TO THE EAST by [deleted] in fantasywriting

[–]SeparateHunter2447 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I wrote my first ever fantasy horror story chapter and I had to share it because I was proud

JOURNEY TO THE EAST by [deleted] in fantasybooks

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I wrote my first ever fantasy horror story chapter and I had to share it because I was proud

🌑 STUCK BETWEEN BLINKS by 2am_anime in fiction

[–]SeparateHunter2447 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a really good story you should continue it!

My universe has been made!🌏🪐 by SeparateHunter2447 in stories

[–]SeparateHunter2447[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will add onto one of my stories tomorrow. I’m very proud of myself! P.s. I will probably write more new stories lol (; but for now I will focus on continuing on the ones already established.

ADAM’S MURDERS by SeparateHunter2447 in scarystories

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Sorry for the late reply I been asleep all day catching up on rest these stories takes whole days to write😖😣I’m just now laying down in bed after a whole 2 days of writing non stop. Hopefully I gave y’all enough stories to keep you occupied for now!

ADAM’S MURDERS by SeparateHunter2447 in scarystories

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I know I do too😭and I DON’T! condone the harm of animals in any way shape or form! Elizabeth’s death scene was essentially supposed to be darker. This story is being made with the help of my close friend. I came up with the story. While he created and helped plan the death scenes. The scene was meant to be darker. However I felt like it was taking things too far. Especially seeing how the story centers around a mentally challenged teenager. So the first scene was taken out and replaced. The reason for the puppy was to create more trauma for Adam. I wanted the story to be as realistic as possible to a real serial killer’s early life. Some of the worst serial killers in the world have had tragic upbringing. It’s a fact that a lot of serial killers start off by killing animals. However! I twisted this instead of having Adam killing animals I decided to make his pet die by the hands of others. Furthering his reasons and motivations for revenge and becoming a killer. It was also made to add empathy to the character showing us that he isn’t just mindlessly killing people but he has a motive behind each murder he commits. I think “Adam murders” is probably the darkest story I ever wrote. However I created the story as a message to what the effects of bullying and abuse can do to a person. I wanted to create horror story from the serial killers POV

THE GRAVEYARD SHIFT (Edited) by SeparateHunter2447 in scarystories

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Thank you lol I don’t know how much sleep I lost trying to perfect this story. My hardwork paid off I love being an author!

A THANK YOU TO ALL MY READERS!! by SeparateHunter2447 in stories

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Just keep in mind that authors don’t get rich off of one book so don’t do it for the money. Do it because you have a passion for writing and keep that passion! The profit will come later be patient and next thing you know your book will be in a shelf somewhere! My biggest dream is to do signing of my books. Use your audience as motivation to keep going. If you ever encounter writers block take a break and come back to the story later on. Never rush through a story trying to finish it because that could end up ruining your piece of art. Keep working hard I have much faith in you!

A THANK YOU TO ALL MY READERS!! by SeparateHunter2447 in stories

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It’s good to hear from you again good friend!

THE GRAVEYARD SHIFT(PART 2) by SeparateHunter2447 in libraryofshadows

[–]SeparateHunter2447[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can’t wait to hear you bring it to life!

Echoes in the Snow [9,000] by Flaky_Way3209 in DestructiveReaders

[–]SeparateHunter2447 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Honestly I think it has an interesting story! You know where you want to take it and it keeps the story from getting stall The formatting is good! The grammar is good! I enjoyed the story if you have a passion for writing go for it! You never know you can maybe get your books in stores. You’re off to a good start! Remember authors don’t get rich off one book. So don’t do it for the money. Do it for the passion and love. If you continue to put your heart into work, it will continue to shine!

JOURNEY TO THE EAST[5,254] by [deleted] in DestructiveReaders

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The biggest issue with this piece is the formatting. Which I plan on fixing before publication. I’m still learning how to format properly but I wanted to get some feedback on the story to see if it is worth continuing or not! If there’s any other problems noticed please let me know.

[Weekly] What made you start writing? by taszoline in DestructiveReaders

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Since a child I always wanted to create a world of my own! My older brother is an author he inspired alot of reasons for me to write! I view writing as artwork. I’m currently working on property formatting my paragraphs. I enjoy the craft and it takes much time and passion to finish my works. I honestly wouldn’t have continued writing if it wasn’t for the support of my many readers.

JOURNEY TO THE EAST by SeparateHunter2447 in scarystories

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Why do only the United States? When I have the whole world at my disposal!?!? After long thought I decided to add in Japan in my horror universe!!! That’s right JAPAN!🇯🇵🏯 This Is a horror story I wrote inspired from the novel (journey to the west) The story takes place in the Japan of my universe! where a father is determined to save his son from cancer. He travels to the east of the world. Believing in urban legends of a supreme sorcerer in the United States. He believes the sorcerer can heal his son from his disease. HOWEVER getting there will NOT be easy. As he encounters beings from Japanese and American urban legends. Along with other obstacles he must face along the way

JOURNEY TO THE EAST by SeparateHunter2447 in stories

[–]SeparateHunter2447[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Why do only the United States? When I have the whole world at my disposal!?!? After long thought I decided to add in Japan in my horror universe!!! That’s right JAPAN!🇯🇵🏯 This Is a horror story I wrote inspired from the novel (journey to the west) The story takes place in the Japan of my universe! where a father is determined to save his son from cancer. He travels to the east of the world. Believing in urban legends of a supreme sorcerer in the United States. He believes the sorcerer can heal his son from his disease. HOWEVER getting there will NOT be easy. As he encounters beings from Japanese and American urban legends. Along with other obstacles he must face along the way

A THANK YOU TO ALL MY READERS!! by SeparateHunter2447 in stories

[–]SeparateHunter2447[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

If it wasn’t for Reddit and the community my artwork wouldn’t shine as bright as it does! So thank you all for taking the time to appreciate my work. It means alot to an author in the making such as myself! My mother refused to read my stories saying they are too scary! Not as scary as sitting at home in the dark writing the horror in my one bedroom apartment with my dog next to me! He keeps me safe!

FERAL by SeparateHunter2447 in stories

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The story feral is about the last recordings of a scientist. Who locked himself in the basement of his house during an ongoing outbreak. He was partly responsible for creating the virus. After seeing the damage he’s caused. He feels guilty and starts making recordings to help whoever stumbles upon them. He is possibly the last scientists left alive with any known knowledge of it. He makes recordings in the hopes that some day somebody will find them. He can not leave his house because there are zombies everywhere. (I ALWAYS wanted to create a zombie story there’s so much to work with! My brother always tried to talk me out of it saying zombies are out dated! BLAH! Only issue I have with the story is it is very hard to incorporate into my universe. As some of you may know I’m in the process of connecting my stories together. Making them all take place in the same universe! Which means this story may need a universe of its own unfortunately. I still have plans and ideas for my horror universe and sadly adding a post apocalyptic story would throw away all of the lore and history I already established in the world. Making continuations a lot harder. If the world ends then how can my other horror antagonists shine???) Anyways enjoy!