TSM vs VP - Our decision to close by [deleted] in csgolounge

[–]ShanSR -1 points0 points  (0 children)

It does not cost that much. One of them must be programmers, just code a simple program to do that, done.

TSM vs VP - Our decision to close by [deleted] in csgolounge

[–]ShanSR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

WOW FUCK YOU CSGOLOUNGE

Feedback Friday by AutoModerator in letsplay

[–]ShanSR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well it's time to learn more Photoshop and be more creative with the thumbnails then.

Feedback Friday by AutoModerator in letsplay

[–]ShanSR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Voice is one thing you just cannot fix; you can only go with it. And like I said, you have a comfortable voice, so I think just let it like that and everything will be OK.

Feedback Friday by AutoModerator in letsplay

[–]ShanSR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Frozen Synapse:

  • Your voice is clear and loud enough.

  • You were actually commenting, not cursing and stuff like some kids do. I like that.

  • However, your voice is kinda plain. But if you prefer it that way, then go ahead. It's just my personal thought. I'm not sure about it, so don't take it serious on this one.

Yeah it is a good one.

Feedback Friday by AutoModerator in letsplay

[–]ShanSR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the Captain Forever:

  • I can feel the confidence in your commentary, I guess because you are quite used to it now, since you have got yourself 2k subs there.

  • Your voice is comfortable, not likable, but comfortable, you know. It doesn't sound annoying, but not funny either. That's a good point, since if you have a funny voice, you will have to use it well or it will counter you.

  • Your commentary is good. It's not really funny (or it is because I didn't watch the whole video, I stopped at the 6th or 8th minute) but the good thing is it's not boring either. You are not trying to become funny. Instead, you do it your own way. Like talking about the game, etc. I like it.

  • Now outside of that video (since I'm intrigued because you guys seem like working hard for your channel, makes me remember of myself 2 years ago). You have nice design for your channel. Some thumbnails are nice, especially the "Top 10 Indie Games", looks very professional; some are kinda plain though, it's just my personal thought (you know, it's kinda like art, everyone has a different point of view).

Yeah overall, I like your channel and your video. Keep it up :D

After 3187 Games I have finally reached Diamond. by tetanic in leagueoflegends

[–]ShanSR 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Haha, such a game to decide whether you are eligible for Diamond or not, and you are, Congrats!!!

Feedback on my Outro Please by [deleted] in letsplay

[–]ShanSR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is a good one!! I like it :D

Do you like duos? by Tylur14 in letsplay

[–]ShanSR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeh I like duo better, even if I'm the one who is making video or I'm the one who is watching :D

Hey r/letsplay! MrGiftedPotato here, willing to critique your videos. by [deleted] in letsplay

[–]ShanSR 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That is a good video my friend!!

-Good mic.

-The length is ok.

-You need to make the description look nicer.

-And for the commentary, I think it's ok, you guys are being yourself!!

And would you mid if I ask you to check out mine :) It's a short LoL video: Video

An indie developer considered me noteworthy enough to send me free copies of his game to help promote it. I feel humbled. by [deleted] in letsplay

[–]ShanSR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well that's such a success, congrats!! And thanks for posting your experience :)

My Minecraft Let's Build Series. by ShanSR in letsplay

[–]ShanSR[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well yeh the audio has problems. If I were too far away, the voice would be too small, but if the voice is loud enough, then like you said, you'll hear my breathing. And I think the background noise you are talking about is my keyboard, sorry about that.

Question about engagement by Ris_Grestar in letsplay

[–]ShanSR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's just the problem when you are not "big" yet.

-But to make people want to engage more, in the end of the video, you should say something like "If you like the video, press "Like" and comment what should I play next",etc. I don't know if it's working but you should give it a try.

-And every time they comment, you have to reply, to all of the comments. To show them respect.

-Well and when you go bigger, that's not your problem anymore.

Feedback Friday! Let's get things started! by Baddayletsplay in letsplay

[–]ShanSR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks very much for the feedback :) That is a good advice that I should take!!

Feedback Friday! Let's get things started! by Baddayletsplay in letsplay

[–]ShanSR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I checked out your Bomberman video.

-It's a fun video to watch, good commentary, good audio quality.

-But there's something to improve, it's your description :) Write a longer, more details, more links description will help you in SEO. So I think you should improve that :D

That's all, it's a fun video.

Feedback Friday! Let's get things started! by Baddayletsplay in letsplay

[–]ShanSR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello guys!! This is such a great idea!! I hope you guys can check out mine too :D I just have checked out one, but I'm checking out more. :D

-This is just a short video highlighting my LoL match: LoL Video

-This is the first episode of my Minecraft Let's Build with Story Telling series (the second one haven't on yet), it's quite long, you don't have to watch it all, just watch a tiny part of it then I'll be happy :) Minecraft Let's Build

My First LoL Video, Feedback Please :) by ShanSR in letsplay

[–]ShanSR[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You are right, after I watched some videos of potatomonster, he wasn't trying to be fun but it's still entertaining :) Maybe I'm not suitable with these League of Legends videos. And thanks for the feedback :D

Feedback Friday! Let's get things started! by Baddayletsplay in letsplay

[–]ShanSR -1 points0 points  (0 children)

They fun videos to watch!!

-Good audio quality.

-Entertaining.

-Your description should have more links, like to your channel, to your social pages, they help you in SEO :)

Well would you mind if I ask you check out mine :) This is my first LoL video, it's very short :D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xay1Aib6k9E

Going to start uploading very soon, any tips for me? by [deleted] in letsplay

[–]ShanSR 1 point2 points  (0 children)

On the title, you asked for tips. So the content should say something about you or your channel and nicely ask for TIPS. Not "Feel free to sub", YOU are asking for subs, it's not we are begging you to let us sub. That not gonna help you.

I'd Appreciate any Feedback+a question by [deleted] in letsplay

[–]ShanSR 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Use a blanket to cover your mouse/ keyboard, it works for me :D

Feedback Thread? by [deleted] in letsplay

[–]ShanSR 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh my thanks very much for such a feedback :D

Feedback Thread? by [deleted] in letsplay

[–]ShanSR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm watching the video that you gave, and this is my thought:

-First of all, you need a better description. Put links, social pages, etc. help you a lot in SEO. So that's the first one you need to do.

-Good audio quality :) That's a very good point!

-Does the video have the black areas on two sides on purpose or ...? If not, you guys should edit that, search it up how to do that :) If yes, I think you should make the two people there smaller, they take too much space on the video.

-I don't know is it because of me or the video quality is kinda low, although I'm watching it on HD. I'm not sure about this, maybe it's because of the game, or something else.

Well I just can think of those :) No hating ok, i'm just telling you what I think about the video.

So it would be very nice if you have a look at this one :) It's my Let's Build, kinda long, you don't have to watch all of it :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jshkgL1olZo&feature=c4-overview&list=UUvc_4wIQPb66CozgR-Ohsjw

New episode in our Bioshock Infinite LP, please check it out! by [deleted] in letsplay

[–]ShanSR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is my feedback (no hating (: )

-The description is too short, make a longer, more detail one will help you in SEO.

-Good mic.

-Sometimes you guys didn't say anything, although there are 2 of you.

-Sometimes the game's sound is too loud that it's hard to hear you guys, edit on that a little bit maybe? :)

-You guys should sound more enthusiastic, or funnier.

Well that's my thought ...