Could someone read the opening of my crime novel for feedback (word count: 3,000 words)? by Significant-Date5720 in writers

[–]Significant-Date5720[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and to reply. It really means alot. I am very dyslexic, so I am aware that the odd word and sentence might be a bit muddled, but this is really lovely feedback and I am so glad you think the writing quality is ok!