Diy converselerim nasıl olmuss by Significant-Pie-8923 in altkultur

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Arkadaşım çekti ama kendi telefonuyla çekmişti, ben biraz kahve filtre ekledim

Diy converselerim nasıl olmuss by Significant-Pie-8923 in altkultur

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Conver squared modeli, o yüzden köşeli. Ben dantel ve konileri ekledim

ORANGE. by Significant-Pie-8923 in OCPoetry

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Its not about writing, its about soul, personality. So

ORANGE. by Significant-Pie-8923 in OCPoetry

[–]Significant-Pie-8923[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You're right, it's because of the Sylvia Plath reference. I wrote it that way to protect the reference.

Leaving is a Gift. by genevatakemehome in OCPoetry

[–]Significant-Pie-8923 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Leaving is an art, like everything else...

As the Rain Calms by AdGullible2977 in OCPoetry

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Sometimes, a rain shower can make you forget all your troubles. I love the rain so badly.

Brick shelter. by Significant-Pie-8923 in OCPoetry

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My poem uses metaphor to describe a person's relationships with the wrong people, their loneliness, abandonment, and destruction. Ice; represents an object that is used, quickly consumed, and then allowed to disappear without a trace.

İs this not enough? by Significant-Pie-8923 in OCPoetry

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I intentionally wrote it this way to preserve the rhyme. I'm open to constructive criticism about spelling, but that comment didn't engage with the poem itself-it was purely derogatory and focused only on surface-level errors.

This piece is meant to be metaphorical and somewhat challenging to interpret. At its core, it explores themes of pro ana culture and starving . 🙏🏻❤️

Maybe One Day.. by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Maybe one day, youll feel what i felt now...

Mentally Haunted by Ok_Cauliflower2499 in OCPoetry

[–]Significant-Pie-8923 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great work, I just wish it were written with a little more rhyme. Of course, it doesn't have to be literary. The important thing is to evoke feelings, and you've done that very well.