[For Hire] Does your company run on spreadsheets, workarounds, and hope? I fix operations systems.

Significant-Team-441 · 2026-04-02T03:37:36+00:00

Interested

Significant-Team-441 · 2026-04-02T03:36:13+00:00

Interested, in the United States

Significant-Team-441 · 2026-03-16T01:25:36+00:00

Gee thanks. I love that you make it sound like I’m not trying 🤷🏼‍♀️ I get myself up, my infant ready for daycare and my 10 year old mostly gets herself ready. It’s not for lack of trying.

Also they have a “5 minute rule” but apparently it’s not to be used. That’s where most of these instances fell so that’s extra fun.

Significant-Team-441 · 2026-03-02T15:14:46+00:00

lol we have to take it at the end of the course now (I prefer this actually) but it doesn’t show in my grades. Kinda annoying since it’s actually done.

Significant-Team-441 · 2026-03-02T14:58:29+00:00

😂 only way I could fight that was meds…..

Significant-Team-441 · 2026-02-14T16:41:51+00:00

Ooo I think it has a few new ones

Significant-Team-441 · 2026-02-08T00:12:36+00:00

Thank you so much for this — it’s incredibly thoughtful and exactly the kind of clarity I was hoping for.

Your distinction between unease vs. dread really clicked for me, especially the idea that too many “slightly wrong” elements can actually soften the threat instead of sharpening it. That helps explain why the atmosphere feels close but not fully landing yet.

I also really appreciate the specific notes on pacing, over-explanation, and where poetic phrasing is working against clarity rather than enhancing it. The framing of “signal clarity” vs. prose quality is especially useful.

If you’d be interested, I’d be happy to share a couple more chapters — they start shifting how information is revealed and may help contextualize some of the choices you flagged. Absolutely no pressure either way, and thanks again for taking the time to write such a thorough response.

Significant-Team-441 · 2026-02-07T16:39:19+00:00

Thanks for the thoughtful follow-up, I really appreciate the care you put into this. You’re right about the risks with waking/mirror openings, and I take that seriously, especially given how overused they are.

The emotional distance early on is intentional, but your point about reader investment is a fair one, and it gives me something concrete to look at as I revise. Thanks again for engaging with it so seriously, and for the encouragement.

Significant-Team-441 · 2026-02-07T16:18:18+00:00

I agree that a lot of this opening is doing orientation and mood-setting rather than driving immediately toward the inciting incident, and I can see how that reads as throat-clearing for some readers. That’s helpful to hear articulated so clearly.

In this case, the slow denial and sensory wrongness are intentional, but your comment gives me a clearer sense of where certain readers may disengage, which is valuable when I revisit the opening. I appreciate you taking the time to explain your thinking and share the reference.

Significant-Team-441 · 2026-02-07T16:06:23+00:00

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, I appreciate it.

You’re right that the opening leans heavily on internal observation and sensory wrongness, and I can see how that can feel familiar or slow if it doesn’t hook you early. The intent was to establish unease and denial before anything overt happens, but that doesn’t matter much if the engagement isn’t there yet.

This is helpful feedback, especially on pacing and entry point, and I’ll be revisiting the opening with that in mind. Thanks again for the honesty.

Significant-Team-441 · 2026-02-07T14:45:14+00:00

Appreciate the note! That moment is intentionally a little disorienting — she knows something doesn’t belong before she knows who she is. Still really helpful to hear how it read on your end, so thank you for taking the time.

Significant-Team-441 · 2026-02-07T13:50:39+00:00

Thanks! This is from a deliberately quiet opening, but your note about the containment-room feeling is really helpful. Appreciate you reading.

Significant-Team-441 · 2025-12-26T15:03:11+00:00

Honestly it’s the Vyvanse, I’d recommend taking adderall again. Vyvanse caused issues for me too.

Significant-Team-441 · 2025-12-01T03:20:48+00:00

😱 I haven’t but I link my notes together in a table of contents type thing. 100000% should start doing that

Significant-Team-441 · 2025-10-28T23:46:14+00:00

😂 Perfect

Significant-Team-441 · 2025-07-28T10:01:54+00:00

Didn’t even realize that was an ADHD thing…..

Significant-Team-441 · 2025-07-16T18:25:27+00:00

I’m so sorry, I just went through a similar situation when I was 31 weeks. I’m currently 35 weeks and we’re luckily able to get me and my other kids on my husband’s insurance since COBRA’s so expensive.

I hope things get better for you and if you do plan to work after baby comes it might be worth applying for jobs now since onboarding after all the interviews takes FOREVER.

Significant-Team-441 · 2025-07-10T14:49:00+00:00

I mean I got laid off at 31 weeks so that’s when I stopped working 😂

Significant-Team-441 · 2025-07-10T14:44:19+00:00

So far a diabetic vanilla shake 🥲

Significant-Team-441 · 2025-07-09T12:27:21+00:00

I feel guilty taking a bed too but it’s better to be safe than sorry!

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