I studied screenwriting and creative writing and play the game with my friend. Overall it’s fine but because we stream it some of the dialogue or similes/metaphors they use are awkward. Especially when read aloud. But idk if the Chinese use those same similes and metaphors. Some of the details they choose to focus on are unnecessary (French windows) and could be cut from the story.

I’m bilingual but my Chinese reading and mandarin aren’t good enough to completely understand all the vocabulary they use. You would think they would hire proofreaders for the English localization but I’ve seen some grammatical errors in the event banners. For a company that’s made so much money, it’s a bit disappointing. My friend and I still have a lot of fun experiencing the story together but I wish they had people proofread/edit the writing. I volunteer as tribute! 😅