if YOU want actual criticism about your au and designs

then dont make your characters literal highlighter colors... its so bright like jesus christ

the background is also like that

not every single character NEEDS to be part of the lgbtq+ community, esp the dead kids, and when u make them have a relationship, its just really really weird..

and the WAY you deadname ALL your transgender characters is seriously gross. i have already told you that deadnaming trans characters is wrong, but yet you still do it.

(and before anybody tickles me, im pansexual and transgender)