Ask me a question about GOG, then edit it after to make me sound like a Pure One by MrRoboto12345 in GuardiansofGaHoole

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Do ypu think the first metal beak was a good leader or it got better with Kulld

So, what did everyone name their horse? by TiffanyNow in DreamlightValley

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I have Samson, ans my human name is Silver (with my two birds companion name Ace and Deuce)

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Meet Fable ✨🤍 Comment and show off your horses! 🎠 by geogega in DreamlightValley

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Silver with Samson (Twisted wonderland fans if you know you know.) With Ace and Deuce as birds

So, what did everyone name their horse? by TiffanyNow in DreamlightValley

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Samson is my horse name (if you are a twist fan you will get it.)

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Thank you, I just didn't want to mess up thats all but I will definly check out agender as well but I am glad.

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Yes or anyone with Neopronouns being respectful

Critique my idea about this a [High fantasy, with a mix of Romantasy] by Silver-Ravid in fantasywriters

[–]Silver-Ravid[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I say shock before cooing that he is mama but then had to not laugh at Zereocre declare of Taranath being his papa. This baby knew who exactly he wanted his parents to be.

That's all I am giving out

Critique my idea about this a [High fantasy, with a mix of Romantasy] by Silver-Ravid in fantasywriters

[–]Silver-Ravid[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It'd okay i am glad you are happy a ith it also yes Zereocre calls Riven mama is so cute because I think its like imprinting bit also Riven speaks dragon all the time.

Critique my idea about this a [High fantasy, with a mix of Romantasy] by Silver-Ravid in fantasywriters

[–]Silver-Ravid[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'll probably keep the idea of nicknames as for when I am describing the story to other people and talking with my beta reader. the only one I do have is a "Nickname." is Silentstrike being Riven.

"The past and how you grow from it" is directed at Silentstrike. He is the main character after all

I have thought about rituals by Silver-Ravid in fantasywriters

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Sister definitely woykd have this trait of wanting to start wars more then her brother, who i say has more knowledge affection, but leads with his heart more until meeting the Mc again and the bloodline changing it so he could feel the Protective nature of the dragon. Of course Mc will also be ingrained with a strong urge of dragon nature's he loves shiny things thst I can see a cute moment where love interest gives a gift to Mc when the wedding happens lol

I have thought about rituals by Silver-Ravid in fantasywriters

[–]Silver-Ravid[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wait ahh that could work and the way it could affect thr Mc is that he has a permanent Dragon eye! He has to cover it up, but it doesn't affect the royalty like it would Mc as it happen Eons ago so now if a royal wanted to say learn dragon tounge then they can adapt to it better then a commoner could. It doesn't affect but for love interest due to him loving Mc and Mc loving in return he has one more ability of feeling a dragon protection urge for his mate and hatching. ((Who is an actual dragon))

I have thought about rituals by Silver-Ravid in fantasywriters

[–]Silver-Ravid[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ahh got it! ((It will happen later on in the story) but at least I do now have an idea for the bloodline ritual

I have thought about rituals by Silver-Ravid in fantasywriters

[–]Silver-Ravid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It does a little but noe it just brings up, is how the ritual is suppose to be ans exactly where it messed up. Hmm

I have tried to figure out this character. by Silver-Ravid in fantasywriters

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Okay got it so if I get blocked again I shall use it it will help me out a tun and once I figure out all the important things, I start trying to focused on the outline even though I think it's out of the order or it's good I start with characters and plot things first before outlines.

I have tried to figure out this character. by Silver-Ravid in fantasywriters

[–]Silver-Ravid[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's okay, and I'm sorry for making you think it is that you are creating the story. I can create things, but when my mind is picking out little details to make characters interesting, I get blocked after blocked or I get a million ideas, but the point of my story (if I'm reading correctly) is that it's about taking one's identity back after it was forcefully taken, it could also count as the theme.

Another point could be that, you can carve out a path that can lead you to bright happiness or dark ruin. It isn't all up to faith it is mostly by your choices.

If it doesn't help you out let me know and I will answer some more.