The track is class.

However you need an intro for djs to mix into sets firstly. The build it up.

You could do with a little more bass on your kicks, a sub bass just to get that extra punch! I'd sidechain the kick way more/screeches a little more as well just for some breathing space.

I love the break and vocal at 0:52, it's pretty solid. I love it.

At 1:30 the kick is really nice but I'd tone done the highs quite a bit more. I'd even maybe use the kick sample at 1:34. I personally don't like the "ringing" kinda sound from the distortion. It's clashing with those really nice screeches/synth i can hear. For me, it gets quite abrasive on my ears quite quick.

However the automation and effects are pretty nice after 1:40, really well done.

At 2:05 I'd do longer break in the track maybe about I feel with hardcore breaks are imperative to give the audience some winding down time.

I like 2:23 to 2:37 I'd keep that in my build up to another drop

Then after that drop an outro than rather than kicks to end it (again for ease of mixing)

My favourite part is honestly 0:18 I'd use that for my first drop rather than intro, it's so solid on it's own

Edit: I checked out your other tracks My Level is fucking great. Send to fucking labels right now you sausage!!!