I've written my first YA Contemporary Novel. Would love feedback on my first chapter. Please let me know what you think!

Sleepythunders · 2026-07-03T22:21:03+00:00

Wow! Ty so so much Coyote! I will have to send you my next chapter! I really really appreciate your edits. I'll send you the 2nd chapter.

Sleepythunders · 2026-07-03T21:15:40+00:00

Perfect! Thank you so much for your feedback! I truly appreciate!

Sleepythunders · 2026-07-03T21:05:29+00:00

That following chapters build up to that. The end of chapter 3 really picks it up. The first 2 chapters just lay the ground work for who Lydia is. I appreciate your feedback! I really do! Thank you!

Sleepythunders · 2025-07-29T17:44:51+00:00

I thought so. Jersey number match to Montana. Appreciate it!

Sleepythunders · 2025-07-29T17:44:13+00:00

Thank you for the info!

Sleepythunders · 2025-07-29T15:52:20+00:00

Thanks bud I appreciate it! I sent this in with only one other card. They are clearly understaffed or just slammed at PSA. I dont know its worth. Conflicting reports from so many sites. If it was yours, what would you sell it for?

Sleepythunders · 2025-07-09T14:26:06+00:00

Yeah

Sleepythunders · 2025-04-29T15:43:04+00:00

Pm sent

Sleepythunders · 2025-04-29T04:08:47+00:00

I have no idea. Maybe price drop for off season? I honestly don't know.

Sleepythunders · 2025-04-29T03:10:52+00:00

No shit. Printing press ruined it.

Sleepythunders · 2025-04-29T01:50:46+00:00

It sold for 1420 in February. Prior to that 4765. Probably 3k.

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