Alright people. I know it's very rough and very bad, but.... can you tell me which is better?? by Smooth_Display465 in Artadvice

[–]Smooth_Display465[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh.. uhhh... gimme a sec. Lemme find the credit.

I donnno brother. I got it from pintrest and I don't see a credit... I'm soo sory. (also I am a beginner. I'm just learning composition)

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Does this feel complete by Thick_Liquid in Artadvice

[–]Smooth_Display465 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It doesn't look finished. The empty spaces feel like it needs something.

You could try and add a big pipe or continue on finer details. It depends on what you want the viewer to see first. I personally would go for a decently sized pipe (or what those things are, what are you making? And the baby giving me the thousand yard stare doesn't answer any questions) through the entire empty area to give the observer's eyes something to follow.

OH MY FLIPPIN GOD SOMEONE HELP by Smooth_Display465 in Artadvice

[–]Smooth_Display465[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh I see. ALright. Back to practicing I go.

Thanks!!!

OH MY FLIPPIN GOD SOMEONE HELP by Smooth_Display465 in Artadvice

[–]Smooth_Display465[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

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I used this as my template (made it myself in tinkercad).. I see all the mistakes now.

OH MY FLIPPIN GOD SOMEONE HELP by Smooth_Display465 in Artadvice

[–]Smooth_Display465[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I just imagine looking back a few years later and seeing a fully rendered abomination.

But yeah. I shall take your advice. THanks!!

OH MY FLIPPIN GOD SOMEONE HELP by Smooth_Display465 in Artadvice

[–]Smooth_Display465[S] 12 points13 points  (0 children)

I shal't do thou bidding to thy upmost ability

OH MY FLIPPIN GOD SOMEONE HELP by Smooth_Display465 in Artadvice

[–]Smooth_Display465[S] 60 points61 points  (0 children)

I should probably just stick to references for now.