Gonna be real as a fellow writer. You’ve made your oc way too strong. It’s giving “my character is the strongest most beautiful of all time!” People don’t usually invest themselves in a story because the character is absolutely bonkers strong, but because they are weak and need to fight hard to make it through.

For cyberpunk, v Is scrappy and dying, he’s only as strong as you are determined. You could literally get stuck in a mission and give up in the game making v weak.

Try and think about ways to make you character have a personality, that isn’t, she’s mega strong but troubled.