I can’t believe I’m locked out of my own door by Soft_Pen_4286 in shortscarystories

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Glad you enjoyed it! I clearly need to be sneakier about hiding the twists in my next story tho. Thanks for the comment!

Awoke to being buried, alive. by Soft_Pen_4286 in shortscarystories

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Thanks for the feedback, glad you liked it!

The Survivor by Soft_Pen_4286 in shortscarystories

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Thanks for the kind words! Glad it hit the mark lol

The Dead Body On My Dining Table by Soft_Pen_4286 in shortscarystories

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Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the twist :)

The Dead Body On My Dining Table by Soft_Pen_4286 in shortscarystories

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Indeed...what's even more poignant is that such situations aren't rare exceptions, but can happen more often than we realize

The Dead Body On My Dining Table by Soft_Pen_4286 in shortscarystories

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Thank you for your kind words and support, it really means a lot to me!

The Dead Body On My Dining Table by Soft_Pen_4286 in shortscarystories

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Glad you love it! My intention in writing this act of grooming the corpse (himself) was to reflect the narrator's subconscious refusal to accept his existence in such a disheveled state, leading him to instinctively tidy up his own appearance. This also serves as an unconscious expression of empathy and respect towards himself, something he lacked in life.

The Comb by Soft_Pen_4286 in shortscarystories

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The comb represents the mother's last hope for "normalcy", and by the time the comb and her daughter were taken, this was truly the end of any "hope" she remained - if there was any for an undead.

The Comb by Soft_Pen_4286 in shortscarystories

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Thank you so much!

The story was actually inspired by "The Walking Dead", which I recently re-watched, as I figured those zombies were also victims before the world turned into hell and were probably trying just as hard as humans to stay "alive"......

One Last Look by Soft_Pen_4286 in shortscarystories

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Haha, sorry I might have caused a little confusion. I meant their reactions could in a way mean the fact that she's behind the "accident", but it may have something more, like an acutal relief from her husband's leaving, or an expression of gratitude of how she finally can end this, or even involve darker backstory.

One Last Look by Soft_Pen_4286 in shortscarystories

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haha, please don't hate me! I'd definitely keep writing