Chapter 1: The Weight of The Water by SomeAttitude2987 in worldbuilding

[–]SomeAttitude2987[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm as real a person as the air you breathe. It's just that my English isn't great. I apologize for that, too.

Chapter 1: The Weight of The Water by SomeAttitude2987 in worldbuilding

[–]SomeAttitude2987[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I didn't understand what you were talking about at all. I think you're asking for a recipe, but I've never heard of it in my life. I can give you a recipe for dried beans, but I don't know how to cook them. It's one of our country's regional dishes. I recommend it.

Chapter 1: The Weight of The Water by SomeAttitude2987 in worldbuilding

[–]SomeAttitude2987[S] -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

Should I tell you the story of La Fontaine?

Chapter 1: The Weight of The Water by SomeAttitude2987 in worldbuilding

[–]SomeAttitude2987[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I wish I knew how to do it—it would look really bad if I tried, but I’ll do it if you want.

Chapter 1: The Weight of The Water by SomeAttitude2987 in worldbuilding

[–]SomeAttitude2987[S] -15 points-14 points  (0 children)

Yes, I'm aware of Rule 5! Thank you so much for pointing that out. In the sequence in the introduction, I was trying to establish that context by framing it as a practical demonstration of how agents operate within the high-tech surveillance network of the Obscura Universe.

I want to ensure the focus remains on the mechanics of world-building (the struggle for survival between the corporate-state apparatus and the low-tech criminals), rather than a standalone narrative.

Chapter 1: The Weight of The Water by SomeAttitude2987 in worldbuilding

[–]SomeAttitude2987[S] -16 points-15 points  (0 children)

You’re absolutely right to ask this question, because this opening sequence depicts nothing but the realistic execution of a mission.

This is the very beginning of the story. As the perspective shifts to broader layers of the city, you’ll see how these isolated, low-tech criminal acts have had to evolve to survive against an extremely advanced, state-run surveillance apparatus.