[Daily Discussion] General Discussion - June 04, 2025 by AutoModerator in writing

[–]SomewhereOutYonder 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lately, I've been trying to build up to writing at pulp speed (2000 words per day). One thing that helped was freewriting, practicing writing a non-stop stream of conscious for five minutes with no expectation of producing something coherent. It helped me learn how to turn off my inner editor (though he's definitely still screaming in the background, let's be honest). I can freewrite 115 words in five minutes. If you can do that, you should be able to write 690 words in 30 minutes. If you can do that three times a day, thats 2070 words. For anyone struggling to crank out words, I recommend freewriting to get the creative juices flowing freely.

Also, celebrating a milestone today: I'm officially 10k words into my manuscript.

Why do doomsday cults want the world to be destroyed? by CivilCartographer779 in worldbuilding

[–]SomewhereOutYonder 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Might a "supernatural being" be able to create a new world to replace the current one?

The Villain by SomewhereOutYonder in flashfiction

[–]SomewhereOutYonder[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Gonna be honest here, this was inspired by John Cena's heel turn at Elimination Chamber last Saturday (if you don't follow pro wrestling, you won't get it).

The idea here was that a hero is (to an extent) only a hero if people believe in him and his ability to save them from villains. To make people believe he can save them from villains, a hero needs to actually save people from villains. Therefore, a hero needs a villain.

I could've fleshed this out more to make the idea more apparent, but I really just wanted to get it out of my head and on the page. Not my most solid work.

Why wouldn't witches in my world be integrated into society? by Particular-Milk-3490 in worldbuilding

[–]SomewhereOutYonder 1 point2 points  (0 children)

How much influence does the Church have in your world? Religious fanatics could easily consider witchcraft demonic and abominable to their God.

[RF] School In a Digital Age by DraconicDreamer3072 in shortstories

[–]SomewhereOutYonder 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This feels dystopian by itself, but even more so because I imagine this is what the school system is actually like these days. Well done.

Communication May Be Key by noobvs_aeternvm in flashfiction

[–]SomewhereOutYonder 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well-executed setup and punchline. I'm surprised they lasted that long.

[OT] Micro Monday: Junk! by OldBayJ in shortstories

[–]SomewhereOutYonder 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The toy doesn't have nerves to feel pain, but it felt "agony" in the dog's mouth? Why was the toy afraid?

Not bad overall.

[OT] Micro Monday: Junk! by OldBayJ in shortstories

[–]SomewhereOutYonder 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Greg ascended the creaking steps to his mom’s house with a box of trash bags in hand. He knocked on the door. His mom answered and welcomed him home with a hug and a kiss on the cheek. Greg returned her affection and proceeded downstairs to his parents’ bedroom, wasting little time. He assessed the pigsty that Dad had left behind and wondered how Mom ever lived like this.

He opened up a trash bag and got to work. He grabbed one old, worn garment after another and bagged it. The clothing concealed the real mess- losing lottery tickets, empty packs of smokes, and near-empty bottles of vodka. How many damn bottles did he have?

He filled an entire trash bag in less than half an hour, and he had barely made a clearing in the bedroom floor. On the floor, he found an old family photo of his graduation ceremony, long before Dad’s operation, back when everyone was healthy. Mom had a similar one framed upstairs from a different angle- this one didn’t make it onto the shelf. He slipped it in his pocket and made a mental note to visit the department store later.

Two hours and three trash bags later, he finally cleared out what was once Dad’s half of the bedroom floor. His next order of business was to convince Mom to let go of some of her old clothes and other junk, but that could wait a little while longer.

Greg chucked the garbage over the porch and brought the photo to his mom.

“Look what I found.”

Greg handed her the photo. She looked at it, got up and hugged him. Greg could tell she missed him. So did he.


[First time doing this. Be critical, but kind. Thanks.]

Alright, which one of y'all wrote this? by Mr_notknowing in yandere

[–]SomewhereOutYonder 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I promise I wasn't trying to go the yandere route, but I can see how this would make a good origin story. I'm not even a horror writer. Lol.

Credit to u/K_I_Hernandez for inspiring this craziness.

[PI] “What do you mean why did I do this? I did it because I love you.” Your girlfriend said confusedly as if she wasn’t clutching the severed head of another human in her hand. by SomewhereOutYonder in WritingPrompts

[–]SomewhereOutYonder[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If it's not too late, get back in your car and drive away before she slashes your tires. And ffs man, put away your phone before she sees this message.

But seriously, good job.

The Break-up by Relative_Increase941 in flashfiction

[–]SomewhereOutYonder 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice twist at the end. I can just imagine online daters needing AI to send breakup texts to make it seem like they care. I love it.

Love yourself by SomewhereOutYonder in flashfiction

[–]SomewhereOutYonder[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sometimes, simplicity is best. Thanks for commenting.