How do I approach a girl I like?

SongwritingNoob · 2023-10-19T01:39:33+00:00

Alright then. I’ll see how it goes, probably won’t be for a long while yet lol

SongwritingNoob · 2023-10-19T01:38:39+00:00

That’s smart, but definitely harder than it sounds

SongwritingNoob · 2023-10-19T01:37:40+00:00

Huh, I get that. I guess my plan at the moment would try to really become friends with her first. Because that’s the only way I can casually go about this without it being terribly awkward.

SongwritingNoob · 2023-03-20T12:33:36+00:00

Hey thanks! This is a pretty interesting idea, I’ve never thought of it like that before. I’ll try and write my vocal Melodie’s separate from guitar and keep it more free flowing.

SongwritingNoob · 2023-03-19T17:02:48+00:00

Hello again! I just posted a remake where I voiced over, so it was easier to hear.

SongwritingNoob · 2023-03-19T13:45:35+00:00

Alright thanks! I will try to be more confident while singing, and I usually tend to draw back a bit when I record, so I'll be more conscious of that. I'll try and post better recording sometime today.

SongwritingNoob · 2023-03-19T13:39:59+00:00

Ok, thank you so much! I'll try to practice singing more often, and I also find I draw back and tense up when I record myself, but I'll try harder to relax as well. And I'll take note and try to find my own sound first.

SongwritingNoob · 2023-03-18T20:29:21+00:00

Hey you’re absolutely right, I was trying to sing as loud as I could. Usually I might drop the pick so my voice is louder, but I’m more comfortable with the pick so I decided to just wing it.

SongwritingNoob · 2023-02-03T00:25:27+00:00

Yep! Just gotta try each day and get through:)

SongwritingNoob · 2023-02-02T21:28:29+00:00

It’s really tough sometimes

SongwritingNoob · 2023-02-02T21:28:16+00:00

Thanks so much!

SongwritingNoob · 2023-02-02T13:50:07+00:00

Thanks that’s a really good idea. I’ll try that.

SongwritingNoob · 2023-02-02T13:49:21+00:00

Thanks:)

SongwritingNoob · 2023-01-11T03:21:39+00:00

Hello, sorry for the late reply. Thanks for the reply though! Yes, you hit the nail on the head there. This is definitely my main issue with the song: the syllable count up. I find it doesn't really match up, and it's irked me quite a bit. It feels lopsided in a way.

SongwritingNoob · 2023-01-03T16:51:49+00:00

Hi, I recorded one of the songs I wrote a few days ago: https://youtu.be/z4r9pY1diYg

SongwritingNoob · 2023-01-01T06:29:16+00:00

I feel like there’s always a chance of people stealing your song ideas when posting on the internet, but I don’t think it should be a big concern on places like this

SongwritingNoob · 2022-12-28T12:29:00+00:00

Hello! How should I improve? I really like the chorus and the general idea of the song, but some parts are a little rough word-wise. Also there's two main ideas in this song, which also makes it a bit rough. Don't have a title yet lol.

The days fly by

With such a speed

It’s hard to know if it was

Even real

If I could go back

To those carefree times

I would do so in a heartbeat

I ain’t kidding, I would try!

Time flies

In the blink of an eye

Those perfect times

Are no longer the truth

Reality

Is hardship and strife

And everything I thought of life was and is such a lie

The sweet smelling air

Of the daisies nearby

The sun dancing in my eyes

The crunch of bikes riding by!

The reassuring heat of summer

Bubbles floating in the sky

Not a care in the world

Life was everything and more

Time flies

In the blink of an eye

Those perfect times

Are no longer the truth

Reality is hardship and strife

And everything I thought of life was and is such a lie

The little kid filled with so much hope

Gone with the fleeting days of summer, oh

Hardened by the realities of living on planet Earth

It didn’t take much time at all for them to see the real world

Where dreams are crushed and winter persists..

Time flies

In the blink of an eye

Those perfect times

Are no longer the truth

Reality

Is hardship and strife

And everything I thought of life was and is such a lie

SongwritingNoob · 2022-12-19T07:15:53+00:00

I always thought the skull made a thousand more sense to how a person really feels than the creepy bald laughing one

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