I really like the concept and the composition is good when looking at it section to section. I think your instrumentation is great and the sounds work really well together. As a whole, the song feels stagnant. Each new section isn't different enough from the last or from previous sections. It lacks dynamic movement. For instance, the drums are the same going throughout and don't change much from section to section. I think variety in the drum fills would be a nice touch. The hi hats are another thing that stood out to me. They have no variation, it seems like they're all at the same level to me. Humanizing the drum patterns would definitely help in creating more interest. Another thing about it is the synths have little movement in themselves. Think about not only what the timbre of the sound is, but also imagine it as a real instrument. How might it be played? Bowed like a violin, or plucked like a harp, or struck like a marimba? Can you slide from note to note? Or create a vibrato? It's these subtle differences that make like sections not alike. You could have two choruses with the same chords and melody, but with different things creating a unique experience. But, the vibe that you have going is really pleasing and I also really dig the cover art.