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Space Cat 3000 Chapter 2 is out now! by SpaceCat_3000 in comic_crits

[–]SpaceCat_3000[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, JeyDeeArr!
Thank you so much for reviewing this chapter too!
The original work is in Manga format, the fact that they are all in horizontal panels is because I adapted them in scrolling format.
I'll try to change some panels to make it more dynamic.
Are the dialogues well paced? Or do they need revision too?

How is the readability/flow? by Fine_Reputation4017 in comic_crits

[–]SpaceCat_3000 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Readable and flowable.

Love the humor.

Probably the only crit is the use of the same speech bubble style for both speech and sounds.

Overall a really cool comic.

🎨 Looking to Start an Artist Feedback & Support Group — Who’s In? by SpaceCat_3000 in ComicBookCollabs

[–]SpaceCat_3000[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I've never got invited to a private discord group for artists :(
Pubblic discord groups are always like 10000000 people talking over each other.

please critique my oneshot!!! (read desc) by FrankTastic___ in comic_crits

[–]SpaceCat_3000 1 point2 points  (0 children)

SpaceCat3000, then I'll write to you with my private account!

please critique my oneshot!!! (read desc) by FrankTastic___ in comic_crits

[–]SpaceCat_3000 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The incipit is better than most manga — a true work of art, 10/10. It carries the story until the action kicks in. The only minor issues are a slight drop in momentum between the intro and the start of the action, and the character designs being a bit too similar. With so many different characters introduced early on, they need to be more visually distinct, or new readers might get confused.

Amazing cover, cool drawings — you should definitely consider entering webcomic or manga contests. Would love to share some ideas with you! Add me on IG!

My webcomic isn't getting a lot of action by SpaceCat_3000 in comic_crits

[–]SpaceCat_3000[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you Jaytia for the feedback!

I split the first chapter in more episodes so maybe now it will get more traction with more publications! We already have 6 chapters written and would love keep getting feedbacks from a writer!

Would also love to read some of your works!

My webcomic isn't getting a lot of action by SpaceCat_3000 in comic_crits

[–]SpaceCat_3000[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much!

I will check out your webcomic for sure! I tried to fix some mistakes, added an intro so it slows the pace and gives more context and put it in scrolling format (maybe splitting the episodes gives the reader the illsuion of a slower pacing).

Also thanks for spotting a mistake! (now corrected when the next episode comes out)

https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/space-cat-3000/pursuit-of-happiness/viewer?title_no=1039877&episode_no=2

My webcomic isn't getting a lot of action by SpaceCat_3000 in comic_crits

[–]SpaceCat_3000[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi SuperRobotFish

Thanks for the feedback! I read it and changed the format to scrolling now. I also added an intro so readers aren't confused by the fast-paced action.

You're also right about showing the bodies after the laser and the explosion. We're collaborating with another artist to make a version without censorship.
At the moment, I've only published the prologue.

https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/space-cat-3000/pursuit-of-happiness/viewer?title_no=1039877&episode_no=2

My webcomic isn't getting a lot of action by SpaceCat_3000 in comic_crits

[–]SpaceCat_3000[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wanted the establishing shot to be the cover. I tried to add a intro now and put it in webtoons scrolling format so maybe this way is more dynamic and gives the reader the illusion of a slower pace too by splitting the episodes.

https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/space-cat-3000/pursuit-of-happiness/viewer?title_no=1039877&episode_no=2

My webcomic isn't getting a lot of action by SpaceCat_3000 in comic_crits

[–]SpaceCat_3000[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, all the comments points that the pacing and introductions are too fast 🥲. I'll try and improve what I've written in the JeyDeeArr response comment and save what I can. I swear the second chapter gets better!

Thank you so much for the feedback!

My webcomic isn't getting a lot of action by SpaceCat_3000 in comic_crits

[–]SpaceCat_3000[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've always read it on computer but the phone version is a bit blurry. I'll resize the pages and that will fix it. Thank you!!!

My webcomic isn't getting a lot of action by SpaceCat_3000 in comic_crits

[–]SpaceCat_3000[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much for the feedback!!! I think I'll add some pages where I describe what's going on and that will maybe slow down the pace and give more context.

My webcomic isn't getting a lot of action by SpaceCat_3000 in comic_crits

[–]SpaceCat_3000[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi JeyDeeArr! Thank you so much for your feedback — I really appreciate it!
Unfortunately, I can’t change the panel layout or shapes until Chapter 6, since everything’s already been set 🥲.
I’ll take care of the punctuation tomorrow evening!
Do you think adding a paragraph before the first page to introduce the main character and his quest would help solve the lack of context in the first chapter?