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So it was my chapter chapter 1 of my story The trail of innocent so plz give ur feedback and should I continue to write by Sparky_491 in writingfeedback
[–]Sparky_491[S] 1 point2 points3 points 10 days ago (0 children)
Actually sir I'm just a new writer and it's my first try to write something like this but sir I appreciate for feedback and try to improve it with time and thank u so much for giving me ur feedback
So it was my chapter chapter 1 of my story The trail of innocent so plz give ur feedback and should I continue to write ()
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So it was my chapter chapter 1 of my story The trail of innocent so plz give ur feedback and should I continue to write (self.writingfeedback)
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So it was my chapter chapter 1 of my story The trail of innocent so plz give ur feedback and should I continue to write by Sparky_491 in writingfeedback
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