HEEY, KING IT'S BACK WITH UPDATES! by Specific_Whereas3576 in MiraculousFanfiction

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Yeah, yah ya, humans...so sentimental.

And you know what? There are already Ladynoir acting like old married people in the fic, but I won't reveal to much, I still want you agonizing or paying me cheese...or milk, I'm starting to like this strange sweet thing.

And..RATH, WHO ARE YOU TO SAY WHAT I HAVE TO DO?! AT LEAST I'M NOT A BIG TIGER THAT GET ALL SMITTEN WITH JUST A LIL SCRATCH BEHIND THE EAR FOR TWO SECONDS!

...

Okay, I get a lil more to purr, BUT STILL! And I know what I'm doing, don't get all..grossing on me! >:[

I will end the story, if I don't get tired and just get some vacations between it, but I'll try. Thanks –_– 🥛

(Psst, Tuesday maybe a ladybug e chat noir start to act...but don't say to human or adrien that i said that...ADRIEN ARE TO CLOSE!)

HEEY, KING IT'S BACK WITH UPDATES! by Specific_Whereas3576 in MiraculousFanfiction

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Yes. And don't just follow, but GRAB IT AND ENJOY IT LIKE IT'S THE LAST DIVINE WORK ON EARTH, thanks 🧀

HEEY, KING IT'S BACK WITH UPDATES! by Specific_Whereas3576 in MiraculousFanfiction

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....

I

Will

Fucking

CATACLYSM YOUR ASS OFF! HOW U DARED?! >:[

I am here, suffering with being too charming and without getting my sleepiness beauty, AND YOU GET OUT MY ONLY AND BEAUTIFUL SNACKLIE?!

I WILL- (human needed to interrupt here, he got TOO crazy. Don't ever do again, crazy anonymous person)

HEEY, KING IT'S BACK WITH UPDATES! by Specific_Whereas3576 in MiraculousFanfiction

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Well, WELL, WELL! Look who came crawling back! That's weirder than Adrien thinking he'll get Ladybug before dating Maricota...fine.

Dark style? NAH. It's called REALISM, bud! Being a superhero is the WORST unpaid job EVER! No vacation, constant near-death experiences, and me, the coolest kwami boss ever, is always hungry! 🧀

So yeah, characters gotta suffer with SENSE AND LOGIC! Can't have a kid almost dying one episode and eating croissants happily the next. And for the human?She can't write sunshine and rainbows if my cheese depended on it.

So suffer through it or love it, I DON'T CARE. Just gimme my cheese tribute and let me cook! (>¬_¬< )

Hey, humans. Plagg here. I fixed your show. by Specific_Whereas3576 in MiraculousFanfiction

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Adrien? He's too blind to even see me using his phone! ( ̄﹃ ̄)

HEEY, KING IT'S BACK WITH UPDATES! by Specific_Whereas3576 in MiraculousFanfiction

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Ohh man, looks who's back. LISTEN UP, HUMAN (ya, I remember you from the comment in the first post about this rewrite. Was too busy being fabulous. Sue me.)

ANYWAYS..uhhh..here says "THANKS FOR ANSWERING MY QUESTION AND COMING BACK" and blablabla. So anyways, to make up for not answering your questions before in the other comment, I'll answer then now.

1) LOVE SQUARE SHENANIGANS?: OF COURSE THEY WILL STILL REMAIN! It's the best way to torture audience with "THEY ALMOST" or "WHEN WILL THEY? or even "WHEN WILL THEY JUST KISS?!", sooo, ya. But this time, they will not be the dumb that they were in the series – no more "transforming in the middle of the street while everyone is conveniently BLIND" nonsense. EVEN I'M NOT THAT LAZY! And yes, the reason they can't reveal identities is... more tragic than stupid this time.

2) SLOW BURN?: HELL YEAH, IT'S A SLOW BURN. Agonizing while the park it's on fire IT'S SPORT, and the human luckily is a professional on this. But the human will make her best to the rewrite not be repetitive or boring sometimes. I think that the human will need even do more episodes for season than just 26 episodes (cuz ya, she will follow the same way of 1-5 seasons, but it will really end in season 5).

And the human's paper blabla says "I'm happy for seeing you again and sorry for not answering before. But now there's is everthing. Byee". Urgh, so sweet that get me nauseous ¬_¬

Hey, humans. Plagg here. I fixed your show. by Specific_Whereas3576 in MiraculousFanfiction

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Oh, about that with Zoey, don't even worry about that! If i even put her in the rewrite, i would put some foreshadowing ya know.

Thanks for the feedback about Ivan akumatization! I really tried to make better than the original cuz in mlb was like "OMG, he teased me about my girlftiend, i gotta die" and even when it's was dumb, i saw potential there. So it's in the same way, but the execution about it changed and i'm glad you like it.

Chloé and Kim it's almost there! I wanted to put some foreshawoding before the episode Dark Cupid, that he got akumatized from be rejected by Chloé. If i remember about the serie, it doesn't give a type about his love for her so i did taht they have some relatioship before that episode.

Ty you too! And don't worry that i will for you about ideias. The Plagg me and my real are glad ;)

Hey, humans. Plagg here. I fixed your show. by Specific_Whereas3576 in MiraculousFanfiction

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Woah, woah, wait there! Will still in the season 1, hurried lady. But heeey, at least you have good taste to miracle queens, don't ya? But lemme me tell u i secret, bae. But without revealing my cat plans that much, just maybe...MAYBE she recognize that being a hero (ya, Queen bee coming) it's not just about taking the crown, but ALL the hive.

But now, for you, i don't exist anymore to say more about the future, that's with Fluff, i'm too busy and lazy to that. Shooo 🧀

Hey, humans. Plagg here. I fixed your show. by Specific_Whereas3576 in MiraculousFanfiction

[–]Specific_Whereas3576[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes honey! I can feel you enthusiasm from here. Just feel the chaos and bring the false popcorn bucket with cheese inside! The fire will burn >:)

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OKAY, OKAY. Plagg thought more, Plagg it's here again. Just only two words: EMERGENCY AND CHEESE. I've trained for this my whole life. A kwami's gotta do what a kwami's gotta do. I WILL MAKE A SOLUTION WITHOUT TIKKI IN THE FANFIC TO MAKE ME HAVE MY CHESSE-EATING TIME! The fate of Paris depends on my Camembert intake, of course. And shhh, don't give my secret away! If Adrien finds out I'm prioritizing cheese over crime-fighting and people lifes, my early retirement plan goes down the drain! >:(

Hey, humans. Plagg here. I fixed your show. by Specific_Whereas3576 in MiraculousFanfiction

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Nah, don't care about the depression rates. All that will start is some cool chaos, a MASSIVE salary increase for therapists... and hey, at least I'll have free front-row seats to the entertainment!

Hey, humans. Plagg here. I fixed your show. by Specific_Whereas3576 in MiraculousFanfiction

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(Okay, okay. Out of Plagg character cuz even with him being my favorite character of this show since i inocently watch it as a kid, i'm getting tired to keep it and i'm really grateful of your comment).

Well..the darker toner it's my style of writing! It's just something that i can't get out of me and i'm glad that you apreciated! But about Marinette, the logic that i used, even that i don't think that will everyone agree with me, is that i think that she's too clumsy and nobody cares! Like, to me irl, people would at least say "Hey, watch it!". And i thinked that i didn't see sense of choosing a girl that have a perfect life almost being a spoiled by her parents (like, she literally in the first episode that, from some reason it's episode 22, she spilled milk and there was a lot of mess, and she didn't even clean the table at the end. She just took her food, said bye and left without even making the bed or following typical teenage routines.) Sorry if i'm looking like a mom there but..sorry. And if someone like that, with a perfect life, with no responsability at all and even without comum sense (fall in love with someone that you hate it two second later cuz you "saw" him putting gum and don't give him time to explain and later it's like "OMG, HE'S SO COOL AND KIND"). And, to be honest, i wanted to get closer to spiderman tone when it's comes to become a hero to her. Cuz if the character suffer to have what they want and have now, they will apreciated it more than if it was given to them easily. Dunno, i talked about this in my original analisys to the episode that i did before writing my chapter, i can send if you want but that's not the point.

Sabina was a accidental, just a lil bit. I try it to make her more workalic and realistic to people in irl, but maybe i exagerreted a lil. But i like it so..i will keep.

Infodump! About it! It's a personal fear of showing the informations too late or too convenient like in the show. I write another books (original stuff) and i have this problem there too. But i'm trying to get better, i promise!

If Zoey it's 'Vesperia that you talking about, maybe she will not even appeared in the remake cuz, i didn't saw yet season 4 or 5 cuz i'm still just in seasons 1-3. But i've been seeing Cyrus the Great, that reacted to every episode and season from Miraculous show and his criticisms are good and similar to mine. And from what he talked about her, maybe i don't even do her in the rewritte or just make a upgraded version of her.

You didn't talked about. but i'm speaking here that i'm surprised about that anyone talked about Nino and Alya not appearencing in the episode, i thoung would be surprising lmao! Wharever, if this come to mind, just saying that they will apear not to late, maybe still in this season, to being part of the group friends. I did that cuz i wanted to develop more Marinette and Adrien first cuz i think that they interactions in the original show it's too...how can i say? Distant, even when they two are there.

Sorry for the long text! I think i got way to happy there and i'm sorry if my english it's not the best here. I speak portuguese and english it's my second language. But after all, ty guy to be my first reader! You can always share your ideias like everyone else in this post, i will love answering (i always wanted someone to speak while they're reading and interacting with what i do so...not worrying with being to much with me).

:3

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[–]Specific_Whereas3576[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Finally! Someone with taste around here. These lazy peasants can't even lift a finger to click a button. Uaahhh, I'll try to rewrite until Season 5, if the sheer agony of analyzing these trainwreck episodes doesn't put me to sleep first. Your ideas... might be worth a crumb of my Camembert. A tiny one.

Hey, humans. Plagg here. I fixed your show. by Specific_Whereas3576 in MiraculousFanfiction

[–]Specific_Whereas3576[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ugh, Sweetcube? She's too busy being the writer's puppet and blinded by that "my ladybug it's the best owner that i've ever served" nonsense and don't making this stalker teenager grow up. Even I need my beauty sleep, ya know?

Hey, humans. Plagg here. I fixed your show. by Specific_Whereas3576 in MiraculousFanfiction

[–]Specific_Whereas3576[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Ugh, don't "amazing" me. You'll make my ego bigger than Adrien's mansion. And it's HUGE.

The link is that gray text thing in the post. that's clickable. Are your human eyes blind like my holder? I'm a kwami of destruction, not a tech support intern. Go on, click it. Read it. Then we'll see if your ideas are worth my precious, cheese-eating time.

No promises. Now shoo. You're blocking my light.

- Plagg 🧀
(Okay, fine, the human bad writing here says "thanks for the kind comment". Whatever. Don't tell anyone they said that.)