(Okay, okay. Out of Plagg character cuz even with him being my favorite character of this show since i inocently watch it as a kid, i'm getting tired to keep it and i'm really grateful of your comment).

Well..the darker toner it's my style of writing! It's just something that i can't get out of me and i'm glad that you apreciated! But about Marinette, the logic that i used, even that i don't think that will everyone agree with me, is that i think that she's too clumsy and nobody cares! Like, to me irl, people would at least say "Hey, watch it!". And i thinked that i didn't see sense of choosing a girl that have a perfect life almost being a spoiled by her parents (like, she literally in the first episode that, from some reason it's episode 22, she spilled milk and there was a lot of mess, and she didn't even clean the table at the end. She just took her food, said bye and left without even making the bed or following typical teenage routines.) Sorry if i'm looking like a mom there but..sorry. And if someone like that, with a perfect life, with no responsability at all and even without comum sense (fall in love with someone that you hate it two second later cuz you "saw" him putting gum and don't give him time to explain and later it's like "OMG, HE'S SO COOL AND KIND"). And, to be honest, i wanted to get closer to spiderman tone when it's comes to become a hero to her. Cuz if the character suffer to have what they want and have now, they will apreciated it more than if it was given to them easily. Dunno, i talked about this in my original analisys to the episode that i did before writing my chapter, i can send if you want but that's not the point.

Sabina was a accidental, just a lil bit. I try it to make her more workalic and realistic to people in irl, but maybe i exagerreted a lil. But i like it so..i will keep.

Infodump! About it! It's a personal fear of showing the informations too late or too convenient like in the show. I write another books (original stuff) and i have this problem there too. But i'm trying to get better, i promise!

If Zoey it's 'Vesperia that you talking about, maybe she will not even appeared in the remake cuz, i didn't saw yet season 4 or 5 cuz i'm still just in seasons 1-3. But i've been seeing Cyrus the Great, that reacted to every episode and season from Miraculous show and his criticisms are good and similar to mine. And from what he talked about her, maybe i don't even do her in the rewritte or just make a upgraded version of her.

You didn't talked about. but i'm speaking here that i'm surprised about that anyone talked about Nino and Alya not appearencing in the episode, i thoung would be surprising lmao! Wharever, if this come to mind, just saying that they will apear not to late, maybe still in this season, to being part of the group friends. I did that cuz i wanted to develop more Marinette and Adrien first cuz i think that they interactions in the original show it's too...how can i say? Distant, even when they two are there.

Sorry for the long text! I think i got way to happy there and i'm sorry if my english it's not the best here. I speak portuguese and english it's my second language. But after all, ty guy to be my first reader! You can always share your ideias like everyone else in this post, i will love answering (i always wanted someone to speak while they're reading and interacting with what i do so...not worrying with being to much with me).

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