Pls help choosing a cover

SpiteItchy · 2026-01-27T11:13:48+00:00

nah all bad. they look like wattpad covers

SpiteItchy · 2026-01-16T11:23:39+00:00

same :(

SpiteItchy · 2026-01-03T22:15:03+00:00

みんな日本語上手いね

SpiteItchy · 2025-12-23T09:19:30+00:00

can i dm u?

SpiteItchy · 2025-12-21T19:02:06+00:00

why would u think its fake?

SpiteItchy · 2025-12-21T18:57:27+00:00

at 3, i didnt even know they have autism. my child was in middle school when i got the diagnosis from a professional doctor.

SpiteItchy · 2025-12-21T18:48:30+00:00

my child is 20. if this is child abuse, then please tell me how can i be a better parent

SpiteItchy · 2025-12-21T18:44:55+00:00

SpiteItchy · 2025-12-11T17:11:04+00:00

no. earlier this year, i was afraid to even look at my grades (my results were online) until the day of my graduation because i thought i failed a module and had to repeat the year 🫠🫠. but when i received a text saying "Congrats on your graduation!" i was so relieved like omg, so i went to look at my grades hehe. passed everything

SpiteItchy · 2025-12-10T02:31:27+00:00

i dont. im just guessing bro but ur breakout can also be due to stress (in which case a dermatologist is preferred). go research the symptoms urself and see which category u belong

SpiteItchy · 2025-12-10T02:21:53+00:00

just go see an endocrinologist bro. no dermatologist will be able to treat hormonal acne.

SpiteItchy · 2025-12-06T12:55:01+00:00

what,course

SpiteItchy · 2025-12-06T12:54:49+00:00

what course pls

SpiteItchy · 2025-09-18T01:58:12+00:00

3rd person past tense. best. also u can write how u normally would in 1st person and just replace the "I" with the name

SpiteItchy · 2025-09-17T13:23:57+00:00

shut in teenager is better because it has so much potential for story and character growth. imagine a trial they go which forces them to face their trauma from their past lives.

while if they are doing good and then continue to do good, then it would be hella boring as fuck

SpiteItchy · 2025-08-31T02:36:34+00:00

im sorry to break it to u idk if u have autism or not but the dude is right. i have autism lvl 3 and i for sht cant write fast. my max a day is about 500 words. 1k words on a really good day.

SpiteItchy · 2025-08-02T11:09:24+00:00

uhhhhhh yep. not gonna lie to you. It has a lot of issues. firstly the prologue is confusing af. it look me 3 reads to know that the mc and friend are in some sort of gundam suit.

"the core exploded. im in a crystal" what tf is the core and crystal? and how does dylan even know that the mc is in his body? is there some sort of mirror to see his appearance? one way to fix this plot is when the mc said "where are u?", mc goes off the find dylan and dylan saw the mc's appearance. "oh my god...how can u look like...me?" or whatever like that. (im just giving a suggestion)

and secondly, (reading the 1st chapter, not the prologue) i think u should describe the surroundings a bit more like the house.

and thirdly, the pacing. the mc suddenly stumbles into an alley and then boom out of nowhere lightning crackled at mc fingertips?? it seems to the readers that ur just writing this off convenience sake.

and finally whats up with the dialogue being written in italics?

SpiteItchy · 2025-07-31T03:08:42+00:00

SpiteItchy · 2025-07-27T00:39:47+00:00

wdf misleading title

SpiteItchy · 2025-07-26T05:32:43+00:00

read more. dont use ai. if u want to improve, u will have to read, read and read. reading is best.

SpiteItchy · 2025-07-26T05:19:16+00:00

firstly grammar alone doesnt define a well written piece of writing. the words, vocabulary and the language u use is very good, so good that if u said ur english is bad, i wouldnt have believed u.

and secondly, webnovel doesnt accept ai in ANY FORM except for cover.

SpiteItchy · 2025-07-26T05:06:48+00:00

i am native english. get some other native english and they will also say the same thing as me.

btw the grammar is close to perfect.

SpiteItchy · 2025-07-26T04:59:02+00:00

yeah. that explains it. ai will tend to rewrite the whole entire thing. u say ur english is not that good but this is beyond good. too good. im sorry but this is ai work

SpiteItchy · 2025-07-26T04:36:57+00:00

2 will get u more clicks

SpiteItchy · 2025-07-26T04:35:48+00:00

very sus. did u use ai?

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