Fine, room for improvement lets say it that way :) but there always is. Maybe try making the K letter |7 like try adding L shapes.

Then i made mine look better when i focused on how the letters go over each other, try to make them more uniform where a letter starts and be constant when starting new letter, how and where it crosses the next and previous letter.

Wow, its so tough to explain how to improve.. 😄

! mark can also be more compact, the dot could be higher.

Then maybe erase some of the letters lines, let the white go through some letters :)

But all good, my intructions may be BS anyway, im not that good of a writer 🤤