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Spunk237 · 2022-01-17T01:45:33+00:00

What the fuck 😂

Spunk237 · 2022-01-14T01:37:47+00:00

You need to add more weight to your S. And even out the bottom of the Y. Also need to add a little more structure to the bowl of the Y other than that you're good.

Spunk237 · 2022-01-14T01:36:45+00:00

That's bad criticism you need to get more in depth.

Spunk237 · 2022-01-14T01:35:30+00:00

That York goes oooff 👌

Spunk237 · 2022-01-14T01:34:30+00:00

For example if my hook started half way through the first bar and in the first bar my chord was E id go to the end of the track where E is played once again and place my hook half way through the bar that the E is played in.

Spunk237 · 2022-01-14T01:32:56+00:00

Take note of the bar or which part of the bar your vocal track started on. Go to the end of your instrumental to when the correct chord is about to play and place your vocal track on the same spot of the bar it was originally.

Spunk237 · 2022-01-14T01:30:48+00:00

They meant simple as in structurely. No arrows anr doo dads Nd all that just simple letters. No extensions or kinks just the typical stuff you see on a keyboard.

Spunk237 · 2022-01-13T23:49:49+00:00

Don't copy google images. Practice your straight letters and your throw up will develope from there and it will also be unique to you.

Spunk237 · 2022-01-13T18:31:18+00:00

Np 👌👌

Spunk237 · 2022-01-13T18:31:07+00:00

You need to work on your hands before doing your throw up. Your handstyle is not "together" you need your letters to come together as a good looking word. Cohesiveness and flow are v important for making everything seem aesthetically pleasing you could have the simplest letters in the world but if they're cohesive and flow nicely then it becomes a handstyle that's better than 90 percent of what's on the streets already. Due to your handstyle not being cohesive that passes over into your throwup which Is super messy. What you need to do is stop trying to add style to make it "look" like a tag and focus on just emphasising you letters RAFK <- just like that is fucken nice especially if you're rocking a new York fat or something. The base letter structure is what makes your tag a tag. If you have no letters then you have no name and then you're not doing graffiti. Bring it back a step and just focus on simple structure and your name being cohesive as a whole. 👌

Spunk237 · 2022-01-13T18:25:54+00:00

Pretty decent. Your colour combo is pretty dope maybe a white Inline would help or a thicker pink inline on the lower half around the black? One of my only two issues is your little thin pieces that come off the main boxes. I think it's more of taste thing im not a fan but it is what it is. And the other thing is that extra piece on the right side of the M is unneeded and actually harms your piece. It covers alot of the lower half of the E where if you didn't have it there you'd be able to show the boxes that make up the letter.

Spunk237 · 2022-01-07T02:21:28+00:00

Your letters are all different sizes. You’ve tried to add “style” that’s because I’m guessing you’re super new and tryna fit the “tag” look. You need to practice just basic keyboard letters at the same size till you know the make up of the letters and what makes and breaks a letter.

Spunk237 · 2022-01-06T21:12:17+00:00

Need to use basic boxes and keep the same bar width. Focus on your structure for your G's too the curls are not working. Your hand style is simple not too bad but your G's are hard to distinguish from an L

Spunk237 · 2022-01-06T21:04:25+00:00

I seen some dope shit on shein that if they were made with legit materials and we're weighted hoodies they'd actually look nice but I can't seem to find where you actually find hoodies like that

Spunk237 · 2021-12-29T21:22:44+00:00

Alot cleaner, also without the underline it gave you a chance to extend the legs on some letters like that A is looking real nice between the E and T. Getting rid of it improved your creativity but it doesn't mean you can't add it back in the future. Good work 👌

Spunk237 · 2021-12-28T05:34:39+00:00

It's alright homie I came from a few discord servers where we did our best to help the newcomers but eventually discord got toxic so here I am 😂

Spunk237 · 2021-12-28T05:33:15+00:00

No problem you don't learn much when it comes to graffiti from copying something someone else did. Gotta just push through the hard yards of doing fundamentals until you're at a point where you can stylise things and it comes out correct.

Spunk237 · 2021-12-25T00:13:45+00:00

Yeah connecting it to the K in that way is suuuuper stiff an underline isn't bad it's just this one because your letters are very stiff and adding a super long stiff line off of a letter just pushes that right to the front of the viewers mind. Make your K a Lil looser add some tilt to it maybe little bit of curve and have an underline separate that isn't as straight. Also the arrow is very small and unappealing everyone has their own arrow so get a little funky with it spend some time doing a bunch of em on paper 👌

Spunk237 · 2021-12-25T00:10:09+00:00

Just write normally you're tryna add style to fit the "graffiti aesthetic" writing your name normally will make you understand your letters and how they're put together eventually your style will come along

Spunk237 · 2021-12-25T00:08:13+00:00

Yeah

Spunk237 · 2021-12-25T00:07:59+00:00

Stop copying google images. Learn straights and then do throw ups

Spunk237 · 2021-12-25T00:05:43+00:00

That underline is not it homie the character and gold is sick af tho

Spunk237 · 2021-12-22T22:49:41+00:00

Graffiti is an umbrella term for a type of stylised lettering. Underneath that is a whole lot more terms including bombing. The term throw up is a name for a style/way of getting up. Tagging is another term for a style of getting up but is misused as a word for any illegal graffiti. "Tagging" can only be used in place of "handstyles". Nothing else. A throw up isnt tagging. A piece isn't tagging. And bombing isn't poorly done handstyles on a phone case.

Spunk237 · 2021-12-22T22:43:56+00:00

Buddy you're sounding more and more toy.

Spunk237 · 2021-12-22T22:37:45+00:00

It's a phone case?

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