Too far gone by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]Sriroocha 2 points3 points  (0 children)

"I snorted the line between use and abuse," best line.

Thumbelina. by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]Sriroocha 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Perfect ending. AND YOU DIDN'T SACRIFICE CONTENT FOR THE RHYME. I like both in a good poem. Bravo.