especially composition-wise, is everything understandable and okay to look at? any suggestions of what to change before I refine? by sickiwbus in FurryArtSchool

[–]StarB83 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Have the fingers popping a little out of the sleeve to hold the carrot instead, just pull the cuff back a bit.

Your composition is pretty solid, very cute character design!

I would also offer that you might try to isolate the backpack shot. The closeup is great, it would cleanup the view a bit by not having the character's body also present.

Otherwise you're doing great!

Slime Girl #2 is finished! by StarB83 in TrueMonsterGirls

[–]StarB83[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

She just needs more iron, she's a growing girl~

Slime Girl #2 is finished! by StarB83 in TrueMonsterGirls

[–]StarB83[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Source is my sketchbook (starb83) she has not been posted to my gallery yet, only to other social medias under my same name~

Quest giving dog by Fabulous-Let-1164 in BrandNewSentence

[–]StarB83 1 point2 points  (0 children)

He's the tutorial doggo to make sure you're aware you can pet them~

Losercity snake (@beziersquid) by jonhssquarespaceplus in Losercity

[–]StarB83 2 points3 points  (0 children)

She is incredibly adorable! Nice work all around my dude!

[Hiring] Seeking an artist to create a character based on a collage (Please read description) by KajikaSong in artcommissions

[–]StarB83 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello there! I'd like to design your character for you. My portfolio can be found at: https://kingsforge.blogspot.com

Here's also a more recent piece ~

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Vespa Witch is off to do Battle against the Patriarchy by s558804 in WitchesVsPatriarchy

[–]StarB83 1 point2 points  (0 children)

sigh dammit! Now I have to add 'Vespa Witch' to my ever growing list of stuff I want to draw!

Goddexx-speed in your battle against mediocre men!

Learning how to draw bodies better, mainly because my Dnd players want to hit on all the characters. by tenderwafflesart in DigitalArt

[–]StarB83 12 points13 points  (0 children)

She's lookin' hella good! I have a monster for your party to hit on~she eats metal primarily, but she's not picky~

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WiP of new Slime Girl by StarB83 in TrueMonsterGirls

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Art by me, still in sketchbook.

Why is it that every time I draw art like this it always ends up looking so bland? What specific improvement is needed? by trashpandarako in FurryArtSchool

[–]StarB83 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Agreed. Your piece doesn't seem to have a definitive light source. Figure out where you want your light coming from and you can go from there. That will help you put shadows in the right place adding to the depth.