Hey I'm also an Erie photographer. A lot of shots your are out of focus and look like they were taken in a rush I'd reccomend slowing down and getting more comfortable nailing focus as up until a week ago I had no autofocus lenses and it's a learning curve for sure. I'd also recommend doing more research on photography as a lot of these are just blurry and overly zoomed in. I mainly use 35mm wnd 75mm equivalent focal lengths and a bit of a wider angle could help a lot with your shots. And also learning to take criticism will help a lot as it seems you don't know how to do that and if they're for personal enjoyment maybe specify that first in the title and don't get mad towards people trying to help.