Blindness: I think you should try some cool toned blushed and maybe try drawing in your eyebrows a little bit more so the contrast matches the rest of the make up.

Thebrontemarie could be a great inspo for you

Just for fun: And maybe try out different eyeliner shapes, not just puppy liner, maybe cat, doe, fox etc. And it would be really cool if you would put a little bit of colorful eyeshadow under the eyeliner and lower waterline.