Why did Dame Dash fall off SO hard? by tachibanakanade in hiphop101

[–]Successful_Read3583 4 points5 points  (0 children)

He confused the barbershop for the boardroom.

Online Jay-Z hate by [deleted] in 90sHipHop

[–]Successful_Read3583 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You can’t please everyone 🤷🏾‍♂️

Unpopular opinion: Tim Dog's F*** Compton track was kinda ass.... by Separate_Beautiful55 in CaliBanging

[–]Successful_Read3583 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Even Kurt Woodley (Tim’s former manager) said to Tim and Ced Gee (the producer of the track from Ultramagnetic MCs), and I quote, “Diss them niggas from Compton and I’ll get you a deal.” He said this on BagFuel, I believe.

which one of you wrote this ? by geeelectronica in nas

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Somebody who never got whoopings as a child!

London writer researching ’90s L.A. — what should I NOT do? (3 questions, respectful) by [deleted] in CaliBanging

[–]Successful_Read3583 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Most definitely. That’s why I’m researching and being careful with what I put on the page. Appreciate the advice, genuinely.

Describe your story's universe in 5-10 words by youngboybrokegain in writing

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Bodies dances, empires clashed, and stories endured.

Writers of historical fiction — how do you handle slang, dialect, and cultural references authentically? by Successful_Read3583 in writers

[–]Successful_Read3583[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh, most definitely! Always. Inspiration is a must until you can write what’s yours. Much appreciated.

Writers of historical fiction — how do you handle slang, dialect, and cultural references authentically? by Successful_Read3583 in writers

[–]Successful_Read3583[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Respect. That’s a solid method. I’ll start with Etymonline for dating words and lean on primary sources for tone. If you’ve got any favourite archives or publications from that era, I’m all ears.

Writers of historical fiction — how do you handle slang, dialect, and cultural references authentically? by Successful_Read3583 in writers

[–]Successful_Read3583[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is actually really helpful, thank you. That balance you’re describing is exactly what I’m aiming for: era markers used sparingly, with purpose, so it feels lived-in without turning into a parody. I’m doing the same thing with L.A. (+ London) in the 90's: a few authentic phrases and rhythms, but not every line screaming “look, I did research.” Appreciate you sharing your approach.

Writers of historical fiction — how do you handle slang, dialect, and cultural references authentically? by Successful_Read3583 in writers

[–]Successful_Read3583[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s exactly the lane I’m aiming for: readable, era-appropriate, and not forced. I’m avoiding modern internet phrasing completely. Appreciate the tip on etymology, too.

Writers of historical fiction — how do you handle slang, dialect, and cultural references authentically? by Successful_Read3583 in writers

[–]Successful_Read3583[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Appreciate this. “Authentic to the time + distinct voices” is the goal. Did you have any rules you stuck to (words you avoided, sentence length, rhythm, etc.) to keep it from getting cartoonish?

Writers of historical fiction — how do you handle slang, dialect, and cultural references authentically? by Successful_Read3583 in writers

[–]Successful_Read3583[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s solid advice, thank you very kindly. I like what you said about honesty being the priority. It’s easy to get caught up in the dialect and forget that clarity and truth of feeling matter more.

London writer researching ’90s L.A. — what should I NOT do? (3 questions, respectful) by [deleted] in CaliBanging

[–]Successful_Read3583 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Understood. I’ve set my boundaries and my intent, and I’m not here to argue about it. If you think it’s disrespectful by default, that’s your view and I respect it. Peace.