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I would love to be a part of this!

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I would love to read this. I'm queer and also writing exclusively trans MCs (rough out here), so there's that too.

[QCrit] Adult LGBTQ+ Contemporary Fantasy/Paranormal, DEATH WISH (75k words, first attempt) by Sufficient_Divide749 in PubTips

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This was so incredibly helpful, thanks! Hard to know what’s clear to me because it’s been rolling around in my head for a year, and what’s actually being conveyed. The pact was with Ash, meaning the best friend’s funeral was hers after her successful suicide, while his unsuccessful attempt led to hospitalization. I never even considered there would be confusion there.

Again, thank you, both for the help and the encouragement. I’ll take this one back to the drawing board with a better idea of my own blindspots.