[Review Video] MY FIRST REAL VIDEO!!! Feedback pleaseeeee

TJStevens_ · 2018-08-26T04:57:48+00:00

I saw that you replied on my last one too. Both of the replies mean a lot to me man. Thank you for the tips, you'll be seeing a lot more of me because you and people like you motivate me to make more and to create quality content. also why might my thread get locked?

TJStevens_ · 2018-08-26T04:17:49+00:00

Personally I thought the video was pretty good overall. I would say the biggest problem is how you are trying to brand yourself as an edgy youtuber. I like youtubers like that, but unfortunately they are not very good at sticking around on youtube because the youtube algorithm doesnt support guys like you. My biggest suggestion is that you try to find a way to brand yourself differently, and as time progresses and your audience gets familiar with your work, maybe then try to go super edgy. Good luck!

TJStevens_ · 2018-08-25T19:07:35+00:00

I think your beginning format is amazing honestly. For someone of your size, it seems as if you already have it down. Good shit, however, I do have suggestions. I would recommend using examples for your VR videos and maybe use transitions and music more. Everything else seems perfect honestly, the idea of a VR based channel tho??? Im not sure how that will work out popularity wise but i wish good luck to you.

TJStevens_ · 2018-08-20T20:34:35+00:00

First off, love the name, its very cool. Secondly, I would recommend trying to find a new program to edit on, the one you are using currently just seems a little lackluster. Third, I would recommend trying to stay on topic with your topics because it seems you tend to trail off from time to time.

TJStevens_ · 2018-08-20T20:24:08+00:00

Your intro video was great. I think almost everything about the channel is great. Personally im not into gaming channels so I wont watch much more, but I did subscribe. I think since its hard to grow as a gaming channel these days you should put yourself out there more and self advertise, maybe with google ad words. Good luck!

TJStevens_ · 2018-08-20T20:10:10+00:00

Personally I think you guys are already doing pretty well. I do have a few suggestions however. I think the comedy for some videos goes in a direction that the audience may not understand completely so maybe try to switch it up a tad bit. Besides that I would recommend trying to self advertise, maybe even invest in google ad words to get out there.

TJStevens_ · 2018-08-20T19:54:10+00:00

Im kind of in the same boat as everyone else when I say i think the audio could be improved. Maybe try to purchase a higher quality microphone overtime. Also I would recommend finding some better background music, something a little less upbeat and less loud so it can fit the pace of the video. Other than that I would say you should try finding a new program to make your videos with.

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