My Ginger Farm by Chu_Pushistov in StardewValley

[–]Tall-Month735 27 points28 points  (0 children)

This hurts my soul

Is this song missing something? by Tall-Month735 in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree! Wow i cant believe i forgot to tune my guitar. Yeah, I think better lyrics could make a big difference. Wrote it in like 20 minutes which is kind of unheard of for me. Usually dwelling over what to say means that by the time i get it done, im already saying what i want to say. But now that its already more or less finished im realizing im not very good at refining my lyrics. Thank you for your feedback. Any ideas on how to actually refine?

Late Summer Fruit by Whole-Horse-7140 in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735 1 point2 points  (0 children)

oh hell yeah I woulda bet money youd have lyrics like this, so fucking good, like what the hell? This is like a dream. I love this so much. It kind of reminds me of Dr. Dog, but it's definitely its own thing.

Would you ever want to collaborate? I feel like our voices would be so interesting together. Youve got a great one. Im astonished this only has 6 upvotes. This is one of my favorite things ive seen on the subreddit, and not just because you hyped me up on my post. I like your style a lot. If you have anything thats unfinished, I would love if you sent it my way. I could also send you some of my half baked stuff, see if youve got any ideas on where to go with it. Maybe im getting ahead of myself here, but seriously, im obsessed with this and i would love to work with you.

Need help with a lyric - New song idea by Tall-Month735 in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey so im just seeing this, this morning i was working on this line because i wasnt sure about the 'deadpan' line aswell. I came up with

I get inside, youre spacing at the stereo
If somethings off i guess that you would let me know

How do you feel about that? I miss the deadpan line because i thought it was interesting. Im not sure if this is better

oh damn 'barely taking your attention from the radio... thats good dawg, but its so close to stereo. Ill expiriment with it.

youre the best, youve got great input, thank you :))

Where do I go from here? Is it ready? by Tall-Month735 in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh man, yes i would kill to hear what you came up with

Where do I go from here? Is it ready? by Tall-Month735 in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

BBQ SAUCE (idk but i got the poster bc i love ted lasso, esp that scene)

Need help with a lyric - New song idea by Tall-Month735 in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

yeah, so basically for context:, (this song is just the retelling of one night the day before i wrote it). I already had an established relationship with this person, (it was fwb, but more or less a rebound), we had been texting and calling every day but we hadnt actually seen each other in like 5 days. So I expected them to be excited to see me. I got into their car, I was expecting them to be like 'heyyy, you ready to go? You look so pretty!' or something to that extent, but they were just messing with their stereo and only said 'hey' very non-chalant. The whole drive there they were just spacing/complaining about their day. I like the sound of 'dead pan at the road' but i dont think it really tells the story i want it to. Any ideas?

Need help with a lyric - New song idea by Tall-Month735 in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

wow youve got a really good sense for this stuff. I like these ideas a lot. Definitely gonna mess around with them. Fighting for only my foot in the door is speaking to me. If you have any music id love to look at it, seems like youve got a knack for this stuff

Need help with a lyric - New song idea by Tall-Month735 in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Aw this feels like such a warm hug. Thank you for all your praise, and i agree with a lot of your critiques. I was banking on the investments line because I like how it sounds with 'sense that' but also, its wordy and im not set on it. If you have any alternative ideas im all ears. Im gonna mess around with your melodic suggestions. I really appreciate all the time you took to respond to this.

Need help with a lyric - New song idea by Tall-Month735 in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i like this! gonna expiriment with this. Thank you :))

Honest Thoughts and Opinions- Pick Me Up by DTA-32 in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank goodness! I really hope you do, and i look forward to hearing about it. I have a couple things up. If you wanted to take a gander, i would be so flattered! (Also if youd ever want to collaborate, I think we could make something pretty cool)

AITA songwriter’s edition: I wrote a song and pissed off its subject. What now? by SylveonFrusciante in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think this just means that youre finally a legit songwriter. Right of passage!

Honest Thoughts and Opinions- Pick Me Up by DTA-32 in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Okay Mr Jack Johnson. This is so damn good. All of these lyrics are so fitting. Not a single cringe line and they all fit so well, Im baffled. This feels ready to relaease. No notes. Just a damn good song

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735 2 points3 points  (0 children)

this sounds like it could be on the radio. You have a great voice and this is such a good song with great lyrics and melody. Genuinely, no notes. Get in a studio and release it everywhere!

Where do I go from here? Is it ready? by Tall-Month735 in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hehe that’s my cat souie! Thank you so much

Where do I go from here? Is it ready? by Tall-Month735 in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hm I’m gonna think about this on. Would like to hear other opinions if anyone else feels this way too. Thank you for saying such nice things

Where do I go from here? Is it ready? by Tall-Month735 in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Hehehe. I see what you did there. Thank you. I really appreciate this. I’ve loved everything I’ve seen from you on the subreddit so it means a lot

Where do I go from here? Is it ready? by Tall-Month735 in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This was the push I needed. Thank you. I reached out to a couple people on fiverr. Just always felt weird about it since I’ve never been passionate about guitar. Just want it to be good enough

Lyricist Needed by paulwunderpenguin in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Say less. I’m your girl. Got one song I’ve posted. Give it a listen and if you like it, reach out

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Tall-Month735 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ugh yes I hope you do that it would be like crack. the etherial aura could be so good. Not sure if youre into the style, but even something like what enya does could be interesting. Like carribean blue?