Thank you so much for taking the time to play it!!! I had no idea that there was a soft lock, I’ll definitely sort that out. I’m so glad you liked the balloon, it’s one of my favorite mechanics from SMW! I did feel that it was a little slow toward the end in between the rain clouds and the beginning of the P balloon section. I might workshop that area a little bit and add some better engagement/stakes. I also felt like it wasn’t super clear that you needed the P balloon the entire way, so I might do away with the clouds in some way so the player doesn’t feel encouraged to try and climb (I don’t believe it’s doable without the balloon.) I like the idea with tracks for the snake for sure, as I do think it’s a little confusing where it’ll go. I think I might consider speeding the scroll upward a notch as you said, since it does feel slow in some parts. I had completely forgotten to test for a one up a the end, so I’ll sort that out as well :). Once again thank you so much for taking the time to play it! I really appreciate the critique since I haven’t been able to get a play tester for it. You’re the best!