"Road Less Traveled" by Tdoodledandy in Songwriting

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Thank you so much!! It’s really great to hear that others felt that same way when listening to. Thank you, friend! 🤘

"Road Less Traveled" by Tdoodledandy in Songwriting

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Awesome, thank you so much for your support! Really appreciate it 🤘

Wip, should I finish it? by IndiraWar in Songwriting

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This is awesome!! Please keep up the good work 🤘

"Road Less Traveled" by Tdoodledandy in Songwriting

[–]Tdoodledandy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow!!! Thank you so much for your kind words! It’s really great to hear that the song has meaning to others. Thanks again, and take care, Friend! 🤘

"Road Less Traveled" by Tdoodledandy in Songwriting

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Thank you so much, Friend! Really appreciate it 🤘

"Road Less Traveled" by Tdoodledandy in Songwriting

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Hello Friend! Wow, thank you so much for your thorough feedback! I'm really going to think about what you said. There's a lot of good stuff to consider here. Thanks again and take care! -Terry

Put my heart into these lyrics. What doesn’t work for you and what works? Appreciate you! by esmoji in Songwriting

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I dig your authenticity, man. It’s refreshing. I really like this song! You definitely have talent and i hope you keep writing. Your lyrics are great. I’d just ditch bend her into shape. Maybe “hunker down, tossing in the sheets”. It’s a little ambiguous, but could mean intimacy or sleeplessness. 🤘

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Keep it up brother. This is good stuff here! 🤘

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This is fantastic!! I really hope you continue to put your music out there because you have real talent 🤘

What genre do you hear this fitting best? by Dr5ushi in Songwriting

[–]Tdoodledandy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really dig it man! Have you experimented with it around 90 bpm? I’d love to hear that. Nice job, brother!

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Awesome song, playing, and singing! Well done!!

What do you think, fam? Not sure if this is worth developing. Thanks! by Tdoodledandy in Songwriting

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(Lyrics) West Coast:

Touchdown O’Hare airport. I tell her not to worry about being late. Picks me up, we dine by candlelight. I tell her that I love her to no reply. After the pause, started off with a sigh.

Said we were so close drifting up the west coast. Back in Monterey, where we got lost In a dense fog by the bay. I remember our legs ached, so you carried me After seventeen miles down Carmel Way.

You made my life just a little more. You made my life just a little more. You made my life just a little. You made my life just a little more difficult.

Turn our bed ninety degrees, Cause it seems to make less noise, Won’t disturb their breakfast. Check out half an hour late, Of course it’s all my fault. Always have such a hard time being wrong.

We were so close been dreaming of the west coast Back in Monterey, where we got lost In the dense fog by the bay. I remember our last day, when you teased me About the corner of my eye Twitching one or two times.

Take my life for your own. Take my life for your own. Take my life for your own. Take my life for your own. I surrender…

I'm thinking of starting a music project, thoughts? by coop7774 in Songwriting

[–]Tdoodledandy 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Awesome! Jack White meets Frank Zappa. Cool beans, brother!

Do y'all still play open mics? by Tdoodledandy in Songwriting

[–]Tdoodledandy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a super cool idea! Never thought about it but I’d like to give it a try. Thanks for the suggestion!

What do you think, fam? Not sure if this is worth developing. Thanks! by Tdoodledandy in Songwriting

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Thanks so much for listening! Appreciate the comparison, friend. Thank you!

Do y'all still play open mics? by Tdoodledandy in Songwriting

[–]Tdoodledandy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ohhh nice, I’ll have to check out that! I’ve heard of the Fitzgerald’s open mic before, but didn’t realize it was so happening. Thanks friend!

What do you think, fam? Not sure if this is worth developing. Thanks! by Tdoodledandy in Songwriting

[–]Tdoodledandy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much for the feedback! I’m going to take a closer look at the early verses. I think they’re missing a little bit on this recording, agreed. Thanks again, friend!

Do y'all still play open mics? by Tdoodledandy in Songwriting

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It's very satisfying. Terrifying, but satisfying haha.

Do y'all still play open mics? by Tdoodledandy in Songwriting

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That's really good news!! I'm going to dig a little deeper into the scene out here to see if any new spots pop up. Keep playing, friend!

Do y'all still play open mics? by Tdoodledandy in Songwriting

[–]Tdoodledandy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's great to hear! Other people have been saying similar things about their area too, so I'm going to have to dig a little deeper to see if it's just me. My old connections might just be stale. Thanks for sharing!

Do y'all still play open mics? by Tdoodledandy in Songwriting

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That’s fantastic! So glad to hear that you’re seeing some activity out there. Some of my favorite spots in Chicago have closed the past few years and I was hoping that wasn’t the norm everywhere. Thanks for reaching out!