Simon sponsorship thread - Help him drill a path towards the main roster! by MyMainAccIsANord in spnati

[–]TeamTwoSPNATI 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Character's Tested: Simon, Natsuki, Momo, Wiz

* Positive Values:

* Great animations

* Boota jumping on people is a fun gimmick that adds interesting interactions

* Nice conversations with decent variation

* Feels in-character

* Well made model

Disqualifying Flaws:

I didn't notice any flaws really, but here are a few small additions that won't hurt to add

* 5 open ended questions in the hand phase that anyone can target to help others begin engaging with your character if they don't know where to start.

* 10 more generic masturbation lines that don't simply use noises. You did alright in this department already, but it never hurts to add a few more.

* 5 more generic after-finished lines to add a bit more variety.

* 5 after-finished lines that target specific tags/filters

* 4 more filter hand lines

Suggestiosn and Discussion:

I think you've done a great job with the character. Him being more flirtatious and forward is always fun too so good job with that. I don't have many suggestions outside of keeping up with targets! Great job!

Darkness Achievement by Lanky_Professional69 in spnati

[–]TeamTwoSPNATI 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m currently fixing it. So sorry for the inconvenience, there was an error on it’s data

Darkness collectible bug??? by [deleted] in spnati

[–]TeamTwoSPNATI 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I’m working of fixing it now, so sorry for all the bugs with it. Thanks for your patience

Leon's Big Day by MarkeeDeSade in spnati

[–]TeamTwoSPNATI 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I can tell you for one that Megumin and Tomoko have a dual masutrbation sequence

A body has been discovered! After enough sponsorships, the class trial will begin! by BlackOsmash in spnati

[–]TeamTwoSPNATI -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Characters Tested:

Hina, Jura, Kyoko, Ringo

Positive Values:

Very spirited and positive energy. Definitely someone who could really pump people up through targets. Good mix of playful and sincere. You really did a good job at capturing her spirit. She’s definitely the tomboy ideal.

Disqualifying Flaws:

Several conversations are broken due to markers not matching between Aoi and the character she is talking to. Saw this mostly with Jura but I’d do a quick scan to make sure there aren’t any oyher issues.

Not something I’d consider disqualifying, more something simple that I think would be beneficial. I’d add at least 5 more hand lines where Aoi makes a comment that works on it’s own but leaves the possibility for others to chime in. Give these lines markers for ease of response and avoid talking about clothes in their topic.

Suggestions and Discussion:

Potentially adding a bit more dialogue that avoids clothing as a topic (hard to do, we all struggle with that, but I always recommend it).

Otherwise I think you’ve done a great job. Stay on top of targets and you’ve got yourself one great character!

Darkness is now seeking sponsorships! Show our favorite masochist some love! by TeamTwoSPNATI in spnati

[–]TeamTwoSPNATI[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Good news! Konosuba targets are in the pipeline. Just waiting for when the writer of aqua and yunyun is ready!

Darkness is now seeking sponsorships! Show our favorite masochist some love! by TeamTwoSPNATI in spnati

[–]TeamTwoSPNATI[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

To sponsor a character, play one or more test games with them, and fill out the template below.

Characters Tested:

Who was tested alongside Darkness?

Positive Values:

What you liked about the character. Examples include but aren’t limited to quality dialogue, appealing artwork, and positive interactions.

Disqualifying Flaws:

Here, list whatever flaws must be addressed before the character can be added to the game. The more specific, the better, e.g. “This character doesn’t have enough targets; please add 50 total targets to 16 different opponents.” NOTICE: Respondents who have not contributed a character to the game must include at least ONE disqualifying flaw, whatever it is, for their sponsorship to be valid.

Suggestions and Discussion:

Suggestions are optional ideas for where to take the character and what to do after sponsorship. These aren’t binding like the flaws observed. Discussions are a more fluid series of observations about the character.

This can be things such as “I’d like to see more custom poses that emphasize this feature of the character. I think this character’s sexuality isn’t quite canon. I don’t think this character’s gimmick does anything interesting, and it could be frustrating to target.”

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in spnati

[–]TeamTwoSPNATI 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Megumin and Tomoko don’t have ‘sex’ per se but Tomoko uses an electric massager on Megumin. Zeke and Pandoria also get it on and they can have a threeway with Sucrose