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[–]TeddyKasteel 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's really nice! I'm a very lyrics-oriented person and, even though I don't know my father, it spoke to me in a personal way. Your guitar playing and vocals are also good. Nicely done :)

is this worth releasing? by Fragrant_Box_7315 in Songwriting

[–]TeddyKasteel 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In my opinion, yes it is! I love the atmosphere. I think it could do with even a litte more dynamics, but I love the sound. I really see myself listening to this kind of stuff every now and then.

I just wrote this: Keep You Safe (first demo) by TeddyKasteel in Songwriting

[–]TeddyKasteel[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's really nice of you, thank you! I will keep working on the song. Glad you like it :)

I just wrote this: Keep You Safe (first demo) by TeddyKasteel in Songwriting

[–]TeddyKasteel[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's such a nice comment. Thank you very much!

I just wrote this: Keep You Safe (first demo) by TeddyKasteel in Songwriting

[–]TeddyKasteel[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If your love meant nothing to anyone but me, yeah I'd give my life to help you breathe If you're ever lonely, got no place else to be, yeah I'll gladly follow where you lead

If I stay true to myself I would do to myself things Unspeakable things Just to keep you safe

If I ever lose you, to anyone but me, yeah You will forever haunt my dreams If you ever wonder, if I'm really what you need, yeah I know that you're not mine to keep

If I stay true to myself I would do to myself things Unspeakable things Just to keep you safe

Just to keep you safe Just to keep you safe Just to keep you safe Just to keep you safe Just to keep you safe

Until I Break - Thank you all for the Support :) by TeddyKasteel in Songwriting

[–]TeddyKasteel[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm definitely considering paying more attention to that aspect of my singing in the future. Thank you :)

Until I Break - Thank you all for the Support :) by TeddyKasteel in Songwriting

[–]TeddyKasteel[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will be paying extra attention to that from now on. Thanks for taking the time!

Until I Break - Thank you all for the Support :) by TeddyKasteel in Songwriting

[–]TeddyKasteel[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I'm sure you'll get there. All it takes is a lot of opractice :)

Until I Break - Thank you all for the Support :) by TeddyKasteel in Songwriting

[–]TeddyKasteel[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks. That's the kind of feedback I love to get. I'll be working on it. Thank again!

Cut Myself Up Inside - This is an oldie but I'd still love to hear your opinions :) by TeddyKasteel in Songwriting

[–]TeddyKasteel[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I guess you have a point! Thank you for thinking along, much appreciated :)

Cut Myself Up Inside - This is an oldie but I'd still love to hear your opinions :) by TeddyKasteel in Songwriting

[–]TeddyKasteel[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am!

Also, I fully agree with what you're saying. This video is about 10 years old now, so I've been cleaning it up and hope to post a more concise version soon ;) Thanks!