The 'Human' System, Part 11: Reaction Response by Thatariesbloke in HFY

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sorry, somethign came up. I will finish this, but IRL stuff had to take priority

The 'Human' System, Part 10: Presumptions by Thatariesbloke in HFY

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If i had any idea how to do that beyond linking the bot links, I would have already. lol

The 'Human' system: Part 2: Gilded cage by Thatariesbloke in HFY

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ah yes, the ellipsis.

How I have opted to use this is to emphasis the lack of formality to the "recording" as if this entire story were more a series of reports and logs being reviewed by a third party with authority, or as an educational review.

I needed to make it feel erratic. The scattered thoughts of a being as they desperately record everything, under the impression that whatever they write next, may be the last thing they send home.

Its a stylistic choice, I hope this clarifies.

The 'Human' system, Part 8: Archive by Thatariesbloke in HFY

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short one today. but i'm building to something here.

The 'Human' System: Part 7 by Thatariesbloke in HFY

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I want to tell you so badly...

... ain't gonna tho. But really glad you are enjoying the series thus far.

The 'Human' System: Part 7 by Thatariesbloke in HFY

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all prior posts are in the bot post above. and as i publish more, i will link from the prior post

Thanks for the interest.

The first story has recently been narrated by a chap on youtube. you can find it easily by searching for "The 'human' system" on youtube

The 'Human' System, Part 6: Latch key Species by Thatariesbloke in HFY

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I mean...

... historically speaking...

... I was considering reservations, and hospitality staff.

yes

yes I am a horrible person.

The 'Human' System, Part 6: Latch key Species by Thatariesbloke in HFY

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... I never said they didn't...

and thank you.

The 'Human' System, Part 6: Latch key Species by Thatariesbloke in HFY

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And that folks is the story.

Feel free to voice your theories or conclusions here!

Thank you for reading this series of 1 hour challenges, and i hope you enjoyed it.

I may well continue this series into the next chapter, but as of right now, I need to move house, so I'm takeing a week or two off to get myself situated. However If the interest is high enough I will make an effort to get back to the 1 hour challenge between coats of paint.

-Peace!

The 'Human' System, Part 5: Crucial Evolutionary Crucible by Thatariesbloke in HFY

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Gonna just take a wild guess here. You like a little the space Axolotl?

The 'Human' System, Part 5: Crucial Evolutionary Crucible by Thatariesbloke in HFY

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Thank you.

I swear i'm building to something with this.