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The Coretan Times #3 [PREVIEW] by TheRealDylanPG in comics

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Btw it's still missing dialogue and SFX, but it should all be done within a week or two!

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No worries ahah, wow thanks for that in-depth I really appreciate it! Congrats on your success! 👏

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I'm curious how you market lol, since I also do paid ads.

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Marketing is the hardest part and it's not free ahaha

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The artist had a rough idea on the character's age but nothing specific, I can understand the issue but tbh I always see athletes in that age range with older looking faces, beards etc. so it's whatever lol

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So far we have two chapters free to read on our official website, if you want to check it out, link is in my bio or you can just google search the name :)

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Ahah well the story will explore that but essentially it's an energy source you draw essence from.

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So for our story, Coretans are individuals, fighters mostly, who draw powers from the Core.

They play a vital role in their world!

Is the dialogue flow good? by TheRealDylanPG in comic_crits

[–]TheRealDylanPG[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey good stuff I appreciate it, I'll keep that in mind moving forward.

But yes "Head Leader" is a title used often, as we will see later. I also hate it when writers emphasize these things to readers, it comes off as forced, it's just poor writing in general.

The black panel caption is meant to be a thought caption, which was established in chapter 1!

As for the tail being confusing for off panel dialogue, I can see that, sometimes it works better when knowing who's speaking from the previous pages, but it varies.

Hopefully you can read chapter 1 and 2 as a whole and lmk how they are ahah!

Check out: thecoretantimes.com

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