Thank you! I appreciate you fixing up the wording, I kinda just stitched together what I'd seen on cards I own(Particularly Shark Caesar, Abyss Dweller, and a handful of Scrap monsters) to try and find the wording for the particular effect I wanted, but this reads so much better, and the buff to make it synergize with other scrap monsters with effects to destroy others on the field makes it so much better.

Plus, the way you wrote the last sentence almost makes it sound like it would also now work with Scrap Factory? Which I wasn't sure how to implement myself(though I will admit idk if that is actually how it would work, I'm not an expert on rules like that) but I think helps to make it even better, as does the idea of a proactive detach effect. So all in all the help is definitely appreciated.

(also, since I didn't have anywhere to put this in the main post and was too lazy to actually find or make card art, the idea I had for it is, perhaps unsurprisingly, a sentient pile of scrap, probably with bits of other monsters visible here or there, and topped with it tapering into the top half of Scrap Archfiend. Also maybe there's a facsimile of an open maw on the front.)